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Happily Ever Disaster

I looked up and there you were My prince My fairytale My happily ever after You stood by my side You made me strong You made me believe in you I trusted you I looked up and there you were My enemy My deepist fear My worst nightmare You brought me down You broke me apart You made me give up my hope I loved you I looked up and there you were My living hell My darkest night My happily ever disaster I'm saying fairwell

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2010 3:33:00 PM

When the man of your dreams turns into your "worst nightmare," saying farewell is the best thing to do, Emily. I'm sorry he brought so much pain into your life. I'm also sorry I haven't responded sooner to your comments, but I'm enjoying a vacation. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2010 9:31:00 PM

it is a disaster, still i love the poem,,love it love it,,lol,,it made perfect sense, have a good one,..p.d.

Jarid Miller

Date: 7/23/2010 3:57:00 PM

A dark poem with a postive ending. Some people never have the courage to say farewell and let their problems overcome them. Well done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2010 3:32:00 PM

The tide changed and you left on the boat going out to sea so I see. ..Sara