Happenings a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

HAPPENINGS a time of turbulencee great moments sparkle reflect &display highlighted in the idealised images of depicted realities underpinning a layer of history in the spectacular &apocalyptic emerging as the thrilling allowed art to explore in more spontaneous ways to capture the volatility of a fleeting moment by inspiring & responding to the immediate sensation

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Mike Bayles

Date: 8/11/2023 2:06:00 AM

I like it. I particularly like "the volatility of a fleeting moment".