Happenings a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

HAPPENINGS

a time
of  turbulencee
great moments
sparkle
 reflect
&display
highlighted
in the
idealised images
of depicted
 realities

 underpinning
a layer
 of history
in
the
 spectacular
&apocalyptic
 emerging
as the
thrilling
 allowed art
 to explore
in more spontaneous
ways
 to capture
the volatility
of a
fleeting  moment
 by
inspiring
& responding
to  the
immediate
sensation

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Mike Bayles

Date: 8/11/2023 2:06:00 AM

I like it. I particularly like "the volatility of a fleeting moment".