Happening of a Death

Happening of a Death
 
He is dying to leave from his pains
His eyes left him alone in the deep dark
His mouth dead and kept closed
His ears denied to receive the sounds nearby
His senses went to its place
His last spell of breath was going on
Flies have taken their seat on his face and
He was still alive by his breath
His thoughts were running to stop at a point
He was dead yes he was dead there
He came out from his roof as air
He is seeing his body as a stranger and
Mingled with this universe as air
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smalling Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 9:52 AM
You have a profound way of handling the mythos, I need for us to be in constant dialogue about this wonderful gift. Great write, God bless you.
Shango Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 8:28 AM
metaphorically transcendently, well execute poem.
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