Kim Merryman Poet Quatrain

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Written on 3/9/23 for my grandaughter's birthday.

Hannah's Eighteenth Birthday

Lovely young woman,
Full of charm and wonder,
Your life lies before you,
Plans and dreams to ponder.

No longer a child,
Today you're eighteen,
And what you'll become,
Remains to be seen.

The whole world is yours,
With opportunities galore.
Spread your wings and fly,
There's so much to explore!

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Terry Flood July 10, 2023 at 4:03 PM Smashing, Kim. I bet she’s chuffed with this. Terry Kim Merryman July 11, 2023 at 8:37 PM Thank you, Terry! She liked it very much.

Rev. Catherine Cassell July 8, 2023 at 6:20 AM It reminds me of my children leaving the nest. Great poem Kim Merryman July 11, 2023 at 8:36 PM Thank you, Catherine!

Kim Rodrigues July 4, 2023 at 8:13 PM A simple blessing! Kim Merryman July 7, 2023 at 9:28 AM Thank you, Kim!

John Read July 2, 2023 at 3:40 AM Hi Kim, that was a lovely tribute to your granddaughter. God Bless. Kim Merryman July 7, 2023 at 9:28 AM Thank you, John!

Ilene Bauer June 25, 2023 at 10:48 AM a beautiful poem for your granddaughter, kim! i hope she appreciated it... Kim Merryman July 7, 2023 at 9:28 AM Thank you, Ilene! She was very touched by it.

Paula Goldsmith June 25, 2023 at 10:28 AM A lovely write. This would make a great card. Have a blessed day/week............ Kim Merryman July 7, 2023 at 9:27 AM Thank you, Paula!

Jan Allison June 25, 2023 at 2:13 AM what a lovely birthday tribute to a very special young lady . Hope she has a lovely day:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Merryman July 7, 2023 at 9:27 AM Thank you, Jan!