Hannah Fell In Love With the Neighbor

Hannah fell in love with the neighbor Worker in department of labor They began to love Inside papa's glove Love's Labour's Lost a papa's favor

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2015 7:55:00 AM

This is an awesome and wonderful poem. Its nice spending some time here.. It feels so quality and deserving. Great pen friend

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/27/2015 2:13:00 AM

Loved the last line... love to read your limericks and haikus... nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/27/2015 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Nad for your lovely comments. God bless.Your friend Rajat

Paul Callus

Date: 1/26/2015 2:30:00 PM

Your wit is special, Rajat! Last line is a wow! Excellent limerick! // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/27/2015 4:33:00 AM

Thank you Paul for your inspiration.Regards>Your friend

Len Gasun

Date: 1/25/2015 12:02:00 AM

This is a fantastic limerick giving me great day's smiles. Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend, Rajat. Thank you so much as well for taking time to read one of my poems. Have a blessed day! love lots, Leonora

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/25/2015 9:07:00 AM

Hi Leonora. I am inspired by your lovely comments.So sweet you are. God bless. Love >rajat