Hannah

Lost, Was she alone While love passed by She by passed love While alone she was Lost

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Liz Walsh

Date: 9/22/2010 5:18:00 AM

Beautiful! Thanks for your nice comment, Nick - Liz

Rachel W

Date: 7/16/2010 6:33:00 PM

How clever! Sad plot, but well written, Nick!

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/29/2010 4:09:00 PM

I'm guessing this is for the palindrome contest. Well done you!!! I'm not sure I can meet this particular challenge. It's perfect ~ Sharon :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/29/2010 1:20:00 PM

Sounds like a perplexing situation for one to be in .Very well worded...Sara

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/29/2010 10:35:00 AM

Wonderful Poem, I enjoyed it!~Tirzah~

Jerri Ward

Date: 6/29/2010 8:38:00 AM

Nick, I like the way your verse comes and goes. Very nice.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/29/2010 7:40:00 AM

Hi Nick.. this would be great for the Palindrome contest .. a little more to it maybe it u like ..words are dynamic.. good luck if u do my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation till July 4th...