Hannah

Lost,
Was she alone
While love passed by
She by passed love
While alone she was Lost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Walsh Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 5:18 AM
Beautiful! Thanks for your nice comment, Nick - Liz
W Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 6:33 PM
How clever! Sad plot, but well written, Nick!
Tideswell Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 4:09 PM
I'm guessing this is for the palindrome contest. Well done you!!! I'm not sure I can meet this particular challenge. It's perfect ~ Sharon :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Sounds like a perplexing situation for one to be in .Very well worded...Sara
Conway Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Wonderful Poem, I enjoyed it!~Tirzah~
Ward Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Nick, I like the way your verse comes and goes. Very nice.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Hi Nick.. this would be great for the Palindrome contest .. a little more to it maybe it u like ..words are dynamic.. good luck if u do my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation till July 4th...
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