Hangover Haiku

Furry tongue, dry mouth
Head throbing in guilty pain
WHY?..Did I get so drunk.
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Agustin Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 12:25 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 30, 2016 at 12:33 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU POST AGAIN
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January 23, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Hi Alison, if you work on the syllables a bit, this would be one awesome Questionku. (form) Awesome verse.... WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Allison Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Made me smile Alison - am glad I am almost tee total:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 23, 2016 at 1:52 AM
Alison,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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