Hangman's Lost Rope

Lifeless tree in snowy winters slumber.
Looks compare like veins on a Devils hand.
Reaching up to escape burning amber.
Far beneath the dark and deep earthly sand.

Contrasting white clouds and blue sky.
Feel the now distant souls of passers by.
Earthly choices now leave the soul adrift.
To earn passage to heaven more than myth.

Deadly tree waiting with hangman's lost rope.
Leads a burning end worse than evil dope.
Stepping against the makers truth in words.
Soul burned and fried, gone. like a common bird.

Actions guide you to final resting place.
May it be soft faces with wings of lace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Beautiful! A painting coming alive! - jeremiah
Esquire Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Judy, I LOVE the way YOU paint YOUR POEM with the Imagery of YOUR words Fantastic Write YOU have an amazing POETIC Talent YOUR Friend in POETRY...HG
Mckenzie Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Judy you sure have a way with your use of imagery very vivid indeed! Nice write! Laura :)
Higgins Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 9:20 AM
Wow! Loved this from start to end. This is a powerful write and the third stanza rocks. Wonderful visuals..Great job!
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