Hanging Within the Shadows Death

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twilight before the dawning history

When they divide us as a nation we at large will fall flat on our faces being worth little as a country in value selling the rights of our future down the Liffey I pray for one that the battle is won as children are the treasures of the heart nothing can come close in value and love. Imagine we have a vote to bring in serial killers make it lawful justice there it crowns every moral thread where it will be turned upside down in favour of bloodshed sad reality based fact inhumane practices dwell corrupt

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/24/2018 7:44:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! A very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very sad, heartfelt!Whole world is all upside down as we know it now.It breaks my heart to hear all the horrible things happening all over.All signs of the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray to God now more than ever for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^