Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Hanging On

grey drapes the colour of my realm
thick heavy fog pervades over
my thoughts that wander
to where I do not know
i cannot see

in bursts of silence
i gasp for air
a stagnant emptiness
is all i find

it boils it rages
and yet i feel it true
that with tomorrow
blue skies may come again


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Mike Bayles June 18, 2024 at 8:12 AM Such a nice, hopeful turn at the end. Line Gauthier September 15, 2024 at 6:13 PM thank you so much, Mike ~

Beata Agustin April 30, 2024 at 1:33 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your poetic brilliance once again which I delight in. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Line Gauthier September 15, 2024 at 6:14 PM Thank you so much, Beata ~ best wishes to you and your loved ones