Hanging On

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grey drapes the colour of my realm thick heavy fog pervades over my thoughts that wander to where I do not know i cannot see in bursts of silence i gasp for air a stagnant emptiness is all i find it boils it rages and yet i feel it true that with tomorrow blue skies may come again AP: 2nd place 2024, Front Page Pick 2024 Posted on April 15, 2024

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Mike Bayles

Date: 6/18/2024 8:12:00 AM

Such a nice, hopeful turn at the end.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 6:13:00 PM

thank you so much, Mike ~

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/30/2024 1:33:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your poetic brilliance once again which I delight in. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 6:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Beata ~ best wishes to you and your loved ones