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Hanging Lanterns

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Fantastical illumination Delicate lanterns lit with love Brilliant bevy of beautiful baubles Mesmerizing cluster of ornate glow Gorgeous gleaming, glistening glimmer Radiant, resplendent golden globe in orbit Mystical combination of crystal clad luster Enchanting glass lanterns, liquid light filled Fascinating spectacle of spherical sunshine Picturesque as princesses pendants Magical muster of misty moonbeams Blaze of shining luminosity Ethereal tiny fire so bright Hanging lanterns
. # . # # . &#& . & . So bright . Each tiny light . Anodized color shines . Soft rays of crystal lines . Always a nice time of year . Lanterns for good cheer . There's happiness in the air . Always time to spare . To make the world . So very bright . At night
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Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 4:49 AM
Cute how you made it look like actual lanterns. The first one has lots of lovely alliteration
Volumes Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Glad you liked it, these ones are fun to do. Best wishes Wen
George Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 11:56 PM
Wendy, a big salute to you! How creative you are! Your lanterns gleam before my eyes as spherical sunshine. "Magical muster of misty moonbeams Blaze of shining luminosity Ethereal tiny fire so bright Easter lanterns". I wish to hang similar luminous globes in my house for Easter. Simply lovely, both the poem and the artwork..... Love and hugs, dear one.
Volumes Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Thank you so much Valsa
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 4:06 AM
- Creatively shaped and beautifully written, S.V. :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thanks sweet Anne Lise
Bowring Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 11:17 PM
Amazing dear one! I don’t know how you do these shapes so magnificently. These are so eye catching filled with such beautiful, poetic words to make them glow. Love the imagery,’ golden globe in orbit’ ‘ misty moonbeams’ and the delightful words for Easter. Without a doubt, you are the best with shape forming and I admire your creativity which is boundless. After reading this, I’m off to work now with a ‘ glow’ in my heart. Thank you dear Wen for your splendid artistry. Xx
Volumes Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 11:34 PM
Awww I bet you say that to all the poets !!! : ) ............... Thanks sweet Chris - just down to my favorite motto ...... "If you cant be better - Be different".... (sometimes it works just as well.) Love your comment - I feel my head swelling already .. We should chat soon. Luv Wen
Narain Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Creative illustrations and poem.
Volumes Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Jay. Hope you have nice time over Easter.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Very nice, S.V.!
Volumes Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Thanks Kim, I finally finished it. Your comment gave me immense encouragement. Cheers Wen.
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