Hanging Around

Mr Caterpillar crawling
out on a limb so far,
breezes in the air,
sun shining so bright,
dark blue skies over
his head, fluffy clouds
making way for
nature to sing,
all of the animals
of the forest asked
him, "What have you
been doing today?"
Mr Caterpillar
replied, "Just hanging
around."

wrote 8-20-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 5:30 PM
Although they crawl, they do move faster than congress. Have a great day James. Vince
Winter Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 3:55 PM
Love it. Can see an illustrated children's book with this one. Too cute! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 12:40 PM
What a cute little poem. This is one I will have to read to my grandkids!....Fondly, Carrie
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