Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Hang Ontight

A solitary moment of peace and respite 
a stretch of water woven with serenity 
Life is a package that longs to be loosed
at the shore of our dreams, 
sunk through the pores of a restful wake
So why do we spend our days noisily so 
neglecting the rock, the whispering sky
If we don't make the time for breath 
and dream,  
it will all come apart at the seams ;

Its a solitary moment of joyful ignite 
with a stretch of water that says, 
"You'll be oka, ... hang on tight "

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M. L. Kiser February 9, 2019 at 1:48 PM Wise advice; we have to take time to dream and play. Well done.

Sheol Moribund February 9, 2019 at 1:41 PM A really descriptive poem of the human psychic and emotional contents of life.

Nette Onclaud February 7, 2019 at 12:53 PM when you keep the faith, all will be well... divine song, pixie!...huggs

Caren Krutsinger February 7, 2019 at 10:37 AM Pixie, this part was great in itself, it was a complete poem by itself. It can stand alone. If you change anything, please leave this part in: "Life is a package that longs to be loosed at the shore of our dreams, "

Heidi Sands February 7, 2019 at 8:48 AM Very nice Pixie :)