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Hang Ontight

A solitary moment of peace and respite 
a stretch of water woven with serenity 
Life is a package that longs to be loosed
at the shore of our dreams, 
sunk through the pores of a restful wake
So why do we spend our days noisily so 
neglecting the rock, the whispering sky
If we don't make the time for breath 
and dream,  
it will all come apart at the seams ;

Its a solitary moment of joyful ignite 
with a stretch of water that says, 
"You'll be oka, ... hang on tight "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/9/2019 1:48:00 PM
Wise advice; we have to take time to dream and play. Well done.
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Date: 2/9/2019 1:41:00 PM
A really descriptive poem of the human psychic and emotional contents of life.
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Date: 2/7/2019 12:53:00 PM
when you keep the faith, all will be well... divine song, pixie!...huggs
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Date: 2/7/2019 10:37:00 AM
Pixie, this part was great in itself, it was a complete poem by itself. It can stand alone. If you change anything, please leave this part in: "Life is a package that longs to be loosed at the shore of our dreams, "
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Date: 2/7/2019 8:48:00 AM
Very nice Pixie :)
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