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Hands Laid Bare

~~+~~ Interlaced fingers, palm against palm... warmth and tenderness emanate; Love and affection abound within the clasp. Comfort and strength, passion, emotion... all laid bare within each caress; Mind, body, soul revealed within the grasp. These fingertips alone hold the vastness of the sea; these hands you long to hold comprise the very heart of me. Mine tell all ~ take these hands and come to know me. ~~+~~

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Silent One

Date: 12/10/2019 11:51:00 AM

I'm not very big on holding hands... But this is a lovely poem..

Hello There
Date: 12/11/2019 11:14:00 AM

Many aren't, but loving touch is still a wondrous thing. Thank you so much for your comments, especially knowing the thoughts you have shared..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/6/2019 7:30:00 AM

The fingertips alone do so much. Well done indeed Hello There!

Hello There
Date: 12/9/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren. We can say so much, offer so much with a simple touch : )

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/5/2019 10:33:00 PM

I really have to 'hand it to you,' HT. This s a beautiful poem. Hands express so much of a person's essence and persona. Thanks, Gershon.

Hello There
Date: 12/9/2019 9:51:00 PM

Lol. Thank you so much, Gershon ~ They certainly can : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/4/2019 3:41:00 AM

To me walking hand in hand is such a romantic gesture ... a sign of love. We have some couples that still do this at work. Love this one. Beautiful my friend :) hugs

Hello There
Date: 12/4/2019 10:46:00 AM

Yes, it's a special gesture. Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words, Sandra :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/3/2019 4:09:00 PM

I could sure use a hand today. :) Soft and lovely my friend. You can certainly learn a lot from just a simple touch of the hand. Beautifully done.

Hello There
Date: 12/3/2019 8:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris :) I think a simple touch really does tell quite a bit...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/3/2019 4:03:00 PM

Enjoyed this romantic poem, HT..indeed it radiates warmth and tenderness--love and affection. Superbly done.

Hello There
Date: 12/3/2019 8:51:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Vijay. I'm so happy you enjoyed this ~ I appreciate your visits and kind words :)