Hands

Slime covers esily
It’s engulfing, digesting
Like an acid dissolving with a noticeable hiss
Diffusing into the brain

And just not leaving, Never leaving
It spreads from the handprint
It dampens the cloth and drips

I shuffle

The apology reaches my ears after
But the smirk that is thrown churns my stomach
I have an urge too,
To let me throw my insides
On a cycle above 60 degrees

Let me ruin myself
Make me
Not even a chance to say no before
And now I’m just tired

It follows constantly
The colour of the shirt, the skin
Hands, hands, hands, hands
Tall, too tall

I should be grateful they didn’t.
Shouldn’t I?
I now leave a trail to follow
tainting everything, or is it tint?

The urge keeps growing
Unfortunately I’m not the only one

I just hate hands, I think

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Date: 11/18/2024 2:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Lina Al-Hakim
Date: 5/31/2025 2:47:00 PM
Very late but thank you so much :)
Date: 11/15/2024 9:37:00 AM
I can feel the angst in your words.. well expressed..
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Lina Al-Hakim
Date: 5/31/2025 2:47:00 PM
Thank you! (late, sorry)
Date: 11/15/2024 6:32:00 AM
This is such an outsiding poem! I LOVE IT!!
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Lina Al-Hakim
Date: 5/31/2025 2:47:00 PM
Thanks so much!
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