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Abosede Ogundare

Hand of Breeze

If the breeze has along and soothing hand
Do touch my bank account with a magical wand
Let the debtors of my mind!
Beach I want, to unwind!
My feet again to burry in sand

Copyright © Abosede Ogundare | Year Posted 2016

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November 1, 2016 at 1:51 AM

A very relatable poem.

Abosede Ogundare

November 2, 2016 at 4:13 PM

Thanks so much Afzal.

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2016 at 9:34 PM

Oh yes, I want that beach too, Abosede. Can you bring me one like magic??

Abosede Ogundare

October 30, 2016 at 1:07 PM

LOL! Alright, let's just hope the magic works . It's always nice having you on my page

Richard Lamoureux

October 28, 2016 at 5:04 PM

Bring on the beach!

Abosede Ogundare

October 30, 2016 at 1:05 PM

Yes! Bring it on Richard. LOL! Thanks friend.

October 28, 2016 at 8:59 AM

This was nice, I'd like to see and feel the same thing.

Abosede Ogundare

October 30, 2016 at 1:00 PM

Thanks Chris...alright, LOL, I hope you feel same thing. Thanks for reading Chris.

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