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Hamsters In Love

Anton was a Russian hamster Alena of the same descent As for him there was no other A feeling of mutual consent In Moscow, is where they were reared A pet store was where they were kept One by one their friends disappeared Tail first, which they came to accept Then one day Anton looked around Alena he just could not find His sadness so deep and profound He constantly ate as he pined He didn't know she was quite close Just put in separate cages Then one day, both flew by their tails Together a love for the ages Alena asked, "Are you ok?" Anton said,"My tail's kind of sore" She said, "Of course, and I would say," "You are more for me to adore!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/8/2018 6:53:00 AM
Awwww...this is so cute! I didn't know that about hampsters, only about geese. Cool!
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/8/2018 4:51:00 PM
I didn't know that about geese! That's open to an interesting poem I would say!!......glad you liked it!
Date: 1/7/2018 10:28:00 PM
What a heartwarming love story that ends so well. Delightful, Pat. Belongs right up there with Romeo and Juliet! LOL
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Date: 1/8/2018 4:50:00 PM
Probably be hard to find actors for the part!.....80).....I do appreciate the sentiment though!!!!
Date: 1/7/2018 7:39:00 PM
This is adorable and reminds me of that Captain and Tennille song, "Muskrat Love!"~Che :)
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/7/2018 9:05:00 PM
Oh yeah, I had about forgot about that song! Thanks for the comment Cheryl!
Date: 1/7/2018 3:06:00 PM
awwww, a cute and entertaining tale (pun intended!). very nice, pat...
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Date: 1/7/2018 3:55:00 PM
Ha! Good one! Glad you liked it!

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