Pat Adams Poet Rhyme

Hamsters In Love

Anton was a Russian hamster
Alena of the same descent 
As for him there was no other
A feeling of mutual consent

In Moscow, is where they were reared
A pet store was where they were kept
One by one their friends disappeared
Tail first, which they came to accept

Then one day Anton looked around 
Alena he just could not find
His sadness so deep and profound
He constantly ate as he pined

He didn't know she was quite close
Just put in separate cages 
Then one day, both flew by their tails
Together a love for the ages

Alena asked, "Are you ok?"
Anton said,"My tail's kind of sore"
She said, "Of course, and I would say,"
"You are more for me to adore!"

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Rhoda Tripp January 8, 2018 at 6:53 AM Awwww...this is so cute! I didn't know that about hampsters, only about geese. Cool! Pat Adams January 8, 2018 at 4:51 PM I didn't know that about geese! That's open to an interesting poem I would say!!......glad you liked it!

Line Gauthier January 7, 2018 at 10:28 PM What a heartwarming love story that ends so well. Delightful, Pat. Belongs right up there with Romeo and Juliet! LOL Pat Adams January 8, 2018 at 4:50 PM Probably be hard to find actors for the part!.....80).....I do appreciate the sentiment though!!!!

Cheryl Hoffman January 7, 2018 at 7:39 PM This is adorable and reminds me of that Captain and Tennille song, "Muskrat Love!"~Che :) Pat Adams January 7, 2018 at 9:05 PM Oh yeah, I had about forgot about that song! Thanks for the comment Cheryl!

Ilene Bauer January 7, 2018 at 3:06 PM awwww, a cute and entertaining tale (pun intended!). very nice, pat... Pat Adams January 7, 2018 at 3:55 PM Ha! Good one! Glad you liked it!