This poem uses a NEW FORM I developed called Criss-Cross Pivot 19 July 2026 for the THROUGH AESTHETICA Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
. . . hands seek the branches eyes search the sky . fingers grasp bark doubts asking why . waiting for certainty my spirit wants to fly . HAMMOCK OF WIND . knows my measure rocks me gently . no ends to tie nothing to let go . the wily wind holds on to me . I'm free, falling my chute holds
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