Hammock

to laze upon the sea shore
strung between the balmy trees
one feels a part of heaven
touch the stars caress the moon

© Harry J Horsman 2012

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Pace Ink-U-Script

October 22, 2012 at 10:34 AM

I see that this took a winning place in a contest..Congrats!! This definitely sounds like a winning poem.

Poet Destroyer A

September 15, 2012 at 11:08 PM

Hi Harry, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD

Sara Kendrick

September 15, 2012 at 5:50 PM

Wow!!Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

September 15, 2012 at 10:19 AM

yes yes yes, THIS one scored HIGH and it was so well deserved. I just loved this one, harry. Belated congrats for your win.

Terry O'Leary

September 14, 2012 at 7:35 PM

Harry, congratulations on your well deserved win! Terry

Tahera Mannan

September 14, 2012 at 3:03 AM

Many Congratulations Harry for this win. An honour to share this position with you.

Kash Poet

September 13, 2012 at 12:17 PM

Love this one very much Harry!Congrats on your top win!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

September 13, 2012 at 6:10 AM

Wow, if I could dive into your poem, I would, Harry! To laze upon the beach caressing the moon, sounds like heaven to me. Congrats on your super first place win! Hugs, Rhonda

Connie Marcum Wong

September 13, 2012 at 3:11 AM

Bravo on your First place win in this contest Harry. Congratulations!!!

Debbie Guzzi

September 12, 2012 at 1:59 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sheri Fresonke Harper

September 12, 2012 at 11:52 AM

Hi Harry, excellent, I'm there in the hammock adoring the night sky with you. Congratulations on your win!

Nette Onclaud

September 12, 2012 at 9:38 AM

i feel like i'm suspended in anination, harry.. wow!.. congrats on your top win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Debra Squyres

September 12, 2012 at 9:04 AM

Such a relaxing scene...ahhhh !! Congrats on your win !!

Gwendolen Song

September 12, 2012 at 6:44 AM

To touch the stars and the moon as I sit in this poetic hammock...ahhhhh, how astonishing, Harry...You got a delightful image here! Congrats friend! gwendolen

Apoorva Patrikar

September 12, 2012 at 6:13 AM

ohho congratulations :) great poem!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

September 12, 2012 at 6:02 AM

Stunning win harry big congratulations oh to be swinging there now xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 12, 2012 at 5:26 AM

Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Harry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 12, 2012 at 4:53 AM

way to go harry luv .. big congrats on first place for a sweet sensational write ...but .. u r always first place with me my friend ..

Len Gasun

September 12, 2012 at 1:08 AM

My hearty congratulations on your GRAND WIN my dear friend, Harry!! hugs:)

Bukang Liwayway

September 11, 2012 at 11:15 PM

Congratulations on your big win harry!!! cheers!!!!!!!! (^_^)

Robert Johnson

September 10, 2012 at 2:47 PM

Up here in minnesota, it sounds pretty good. hhhhm.

Bl Devnath

September 10, 2012 at 9:26 AM

h! how sweet it is. Excellent one, enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Robert A. Dufresne

September 10, 2012 at 4:33 AM

Good luck in the contest Harry. Heading to the Atlantic shore tomorrow to work for the day. I'll think of you and your poem while checking out the waves splashing against the shore.