Hammock

Wedding dress of the blue sky
Sprayed with shiny golden stars
Laid amid silver flowers
Angels sprinkled soft dew drops

By-Tahera Mannan
Contest- Hammock of the sky in Tanaga

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Anthony Nutter

September 21, 2012 at 5:34 PM

You painted a beautiful picture

Poet Destroyer A

September 15, 2012 at 11:08 PM

Tahera, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD

Kulsum Mehmood

September 15, 2012 at 8:59 PM

Congratulations Tahera. Beautiful poem.

Andrea Dietrich

September 15, 2012 at 10:18 AM

WOW, I am now reviewing the list and see it was at the top of the list. I had predicted it. Am I good or what? hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

September 14, 2012 at 7:16 PM

this is one I had adored and I can see from the congrats that you won in the contest. Later I will review the list again to see what placement you got. I hope it was the high place you deserved. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

September 14, 2012 at 4:35 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Very creative..Thanks for stopping by wirh congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

September 14, 2012 at 6:10 AM

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Kash Poet

September 13, 2012 at 12:15 PM

An Excellent poem here Tahera!Congrats on your top win!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

September 13, 2012 at 6:14 AM

Breathtakingly beautiful image, Tahera! Congrats on your superb first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Connie Marcum Wong

September 13, 2012 at 3:27 AM

A beautiful vision and an outstanding well deserved win with this First place winning entry. Congratulations!

Tahera Mannan

September 14, 2012 at 3:26 AM

Thanks Connie. meant a lot.

Debbie Guzzi

September 12, 2012 at 1:58 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sheri Fresonke Harper

September 12, 2012 at 11:51 AM

Tahera, Excellent metaphor, I can see how beautiful it all is, love the last line. Congrat's on your win!

Nette Onclaud

September 12, 2012 at 9:37 AM

so good to see you again, tahera... impeccable personification and imagery... congrats on your top win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Debra Squyres

September 12, 2012 at 9:03 AM

What a beautiful image I get from this...worthy of a bride. Congrats on your winning poem in the contest !!

Gwendolen Song

September 12, 2012 at 6:43 AM

A gorgeous display in your winning write, Tahera...congrats..who would of tho't about a flowing wedding dress? Great image! gwendolen

Apoorva Patrikar

September 12, 2012 at 6:13 AM

ongratulations :) great poem!! this was an obvious win!

Tahera Mannan

September 14, 2012 at 3:24 AM

Thanks Apoorva.

Irfana Ali Bhat

September 12, 2012 at 6:12 AM

Congrats on ur well deserved win...

Tahera Mannan

September 14, 2012 at 3:27 AM

Thanks Irfana.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

September 12, 2012 at 6:00 AM

Congratulations on your stunning win Tahera xx

Tahera Mannan

September 14, 2012 at 3:27 AM

Thanks Mandy.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 12, 2012 at 5:25 AM

Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Tahera. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

September 14, 2012 at 3:28 AM

Thanks Carol.