Hammock

Wedding dress of the blue sky Sprayed with shiny golden stars Laid amid silver flowers Angels sprinkled soft dew drops By-Tahera Mannan Contest- Hammock of the sky in Tanaga

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/21/2012 5:34:00 PM

You painted a beautiful picture

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2012 11:08:00 PM

Tahera, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD

Kulsum Mehmood

Date: 9/15/2012 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations Tahera. Beautiful poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2012 10:18:00 AM

WOW, I am now reviewing the list and see it was at the top of the list. I had predicted it. Am I good or what? hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2012 7:16:00 PM

this is one I had adored and I can see from the congrats that you won in the contest. Later I will review the list again to see what placement you got. I hope it was the high place you deserved. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2012 4:35:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Very creative..Thanks for stopping by wirh congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/14/2012 6:10:00 AM

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Kash Poet

Date: 9/13/2012 12:15:00 PM

An Excellent poem here Tahera!Congrats on your top win!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/13/2012 6:14:00 AM

Breathtakingly beautiful image, Tahera! Congrats on your superb first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/13/2012 3:27:00 AM

A beautiful vision and an outstanding well deserved win with this First place winning entry. Congratulations!

Tahera Mannan
Date: 9/14/2012 3:26:00 AM

Thanks Connie. meant a lot.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/12/2012 1:58:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 9/12/2012 11:51:00 AM

Tahera, Excellent metaphor, I can see how beautiful it all is, love the last line. Congrat's on your win!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2012 9:37:00 AM

so good to see you again, tahera... impeccable personification and imagery... congrats on your top win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Debra Squyres

Date: 9/12/2012 9:03:00 AM

What a beautiful image I get from this...worthy of a bride. Congrats on your winning poem in the contest !!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/12/2012 6:43:00 AM

A gorgeous display in your winning write, Tahera...congrats..who would of tho't about a flowing wedding dress? Great image! gwendolen

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/12/2012 6:13:00 AM

ongratulations :) great poem!! this was an obvious win!

Tahera Mannan
Date: 9/14/2012 3:24:00 AM

Thanks Apoorva.

Irfana Ali Bhat

Date: 9/12/2012 6:12:00 AM

Congrats on ur well deserved win...

Tahera Mannan
Date: 9/14/2012 3:27:00 AM

Thanks Irfana.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/12/2012 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your stunning win Tahera xx

Tahera Mannan
Date: 9/14/2012 3:27:00 AM

Thanks Mandy.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2012 5:25:00 AM

Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Tahera. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan
Date: 9/14/2012 3:28:00 AM

Thanks Carol.