Hamilton On the 4th

“Hamilton’s” the show to watch
On Independence Day.
If you’ve not seen it, find out if
You can concoct a way.

On Broadway, it was magical – 
No one would disagree – 
But what appealed to me the most
Was, oh, the poetry!

The acting, music, costumes, sets
Were all top-notch, indeed,
Yet all those rhyming lyrics must be
Brilliant to succeed.

And that they are! Rewatching, I
Remembered the advice – 
Have by your side the written words,
On paper or device.

Or memorize them, like my son,
So you’ll appreciate
The fact that they are super-mega-
Ultra flat-out great!

July the 4th ‘s for barbecue
And fireworks and such.
Still, if you can, catch “Hamilton” – 
You’ll like it oh, so much!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/8/2020 12:20:00 PM
ilene, this was super-mega-ultra flat-out great! I still have yet to see the show, but it has been recommended to me by many. Your tip to have the printed lyrics in hand is one I will have to remember. Thanks for this great write and endorsement!
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Date: 7/5/2020 2:51:00 PM
It's not a show I am familiar with, thanks for sharing Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2020 11:46:00 PM
You have written an enticing review here, Ilene...My daughter saw it in New York as well. She echoes what you wrote 100%, plus: "Dad, you lazy bum, get out of your armchair and go see it!" Ha, ha. She's right about everything except the armchair. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 7/4/2020 10:34:00 PM
Ilene you make me want to see it. So thank you for a lovely review.
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Date: 7/4/2020 5:24:00 PM
I have not seen it but MUST so I understand what my granddaughter is on about! Thank you for the reminder! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/4/2020 5:04:00 PM
Oh! Not Hamilton Ontario, that makes more sense ;D, Had not heard of it (being Canuck no doubt) but enjoyed your poem. I hope you are enjoying your day, have fun & stay safe! xomo <3
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