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Halo

I want a halo on my head as I disappear in the vortex of eternity
eating my soup from a bowl given to me by a departed soul I wonder
not afraid just curious and leave a clean plate behind me
ready to smile at the sky a last time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Anish Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Liked the phrase "vortex of eternity". Stimulating poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Labeau Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 10:20 PM
well well its wonderful to go there and back even better
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