Juli- Michelle Poet Rhyme

Hallway Heartbeats

This feeling for you is growing
But nothing is worse than knowing
The emotion I may be showing
Is going to give me away

I'm scared that you may be suspecting
The dots you may be connecting
When my emotions are disconnecting
My hearts beats with no second delay

Your attention becomes so addicting
As I should have been predicting
But my heart is very restricting
It knows it gets hurt this way

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Yanny Widjanarko December 9, 2012 at 8:09 AM Woow, dillematic love story, though this one really wonderfully described through your verses :D, thank you Jull for your visit to my page, your words really encouraging, and I'm glad that you like it too :)-Hug, Yanny

Michael J. Falotico December 9, 2012 at 7:50 AM Deep piece from your soul ... The best place to write from.. very good.. Hugs n luv Michael

Jon A Cavanaugh December 9, 2012 at 6:12 AM Love can be both rewarding and painful. I hope you find someone that is sensitive, thoughtful, and adoring. Wishing you the very best.

Sara Kendrick December 9, 2012 at 4:58 AM If it is meant to be, it will all work out..Get to know the man before getting deeply invovled is my advice to a young lady ......Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Joseph May December 9, 2012 at 4:24 AM wonderful write Juli...

Dan Kearley December 9, 2012 at 12:03 AM A nice write here Juli.. All I can say is..You only live once! And it's better to just find out how he feels before it's to late. I think? You will never know unless you try. :o)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair December 8, 2012 at 11:02 PM Rhyming well and connecting well, love this piece, friend!! Jag

Toquyen Harrell December 8, 2012 at 10:59 PM Love is so pure, isn't it? First signs of love, dear friend. Just go with it. I heard someone said "one never ventures, never gains". Great poem. Love ya, Toquyen

Richard Palmer December 8, 2012 at 10:28 PM your rhymes are sick too,love this piece,and I see you are aware of the facts of life,great write Juli,thanks for your comment it made my night,check out a few more,hope you become a fan lol Juli- Michelle December 8, 2012 at 10:29 PM Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A December 8, 2012 at 10:18 PM Hello Juli, hard to ignore certain heartbeats. you should go with the flow... and let him connect all the dots he wants... you never know he might like all he connects...always~ PD Juli- Michelle December 8, 2012 at 10:31 PM I will try. Thanks :)