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HALLS OF AMENTI 2

HALLS OF AMENTI 2

Doom dark in the 
Halls of Amenti
whole families are 
dropped down drains 
covers shut tight
no pink flamingos  
not a single orange 
tree in sight

They grope along hold 
each other’s fat oozing 
rats over feet beat
noisy fish tank heat
some scream 
where’s hubby cream !
others connect online
or via human law 
to no avail sore
This is Amenti !

Thorns chopped into 
wrists or unsealed 
foreheads reel
it happens daily
sniffer shovel forward
to a shadow on Throne
hot flamed bones
all around moan

Ten swords swagger 
sweat dripping from
Consol Partner’s neck 
factory glass bottles 
smashed heck
for dissolution in 
Violet Flames fleck
stomach blanching
another announces
Bankruptcy ! flicking
coloured hair moving
cushions bare
dahlias grace coffee 
table, hiding face
no mace or grace
This is Amenti !

See Mark of Beast 
a shadow snore faint 
speaks with female 
undertones weak 
s insults moans
declares receipts for
equipment stole
Amenti  Amenti !
Dark corridors malign
assign meat seats
eat their capital
feats

Piscean, old one  
travelled all zodiacs 
watch breaking points
sob alone signing 
death documents 
out of sight blight
zero power might
there are other ways
I say, be a Light 

A scribe writes on
sheets of A4 more
pen stolid thick
as thighs
shoes pointed high
she listens well
detects lies galore
to ignore sore
pacifies “One day at a time”
waving document dimes
feeding Matrix rhymes 

They call a neighbour 
to strengthen bolts
trying to halt jolts
avail to cosmic jail
have already fallen 
prey to Halls of Amenti 
what is the point of 
painting shame ?

Stand before  
Lord of the Dark 
confess 
He pierces lightning 
tests into swarming 
wasp nests 
out they buzz
from sacral fuss
realise they are in
Amenti cannot hush
stings come fast 
before wings blast
   
Sky is waiting wide  
there is a tunnel out 
of darkness besides 
tower moments are 
portal shocks cracking
habitual actions fracking 
exposure first before
Amenti’s Lord of Dark 
underworld’s confusion
unpredictable illusions 

Come come dispel
concentric circles 
spiral loop hurdles
Fire makes charcoal 
to write your hoary 
stories glory 
Amenti exists to list 
lessons here awaiting 
no dating or mating

Choose a tunnel
out of the funnel
Hurry towards pink 
flamingos flawlessly 
flapping rapping ! 

  

©GhairoDanielsPoetry&
Song2025






Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/4/2025 3:36:00 AM
You are so special in your way with expressing! So many brilliant lines in this, especially the zodiac sign stanza really stood out for me along with the ending! Brilliant and very different metaphors that made me pause and think deep! "Fire makes charcoal to write your~" what a line "Sky is waiting wide there is a tunnel out of darkness besides tower moments are portal shocks cracking" deep! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 3/4/2025 4:28:00 AM
ThKU Empress. Really I appreciate your feedback, as always. U are a Star I resonate with. Very encouraging because I thought this one was too dark.

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