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HALLS OF AMENTI 2

HALLS OF AMENTI 2 Doom dark in the Halls of Amenti whole families are dropped down drains covers shut tight no pink flamingos not a single orange tree in sight They grope along hold each other’s fat oozing rats over feet beat noisy fish tank heat some scream where’s hubby cream ! others connect online or via human law to no avail sore This is Amenti ! Thorns chopped into wrists or unsealed foreheads reel it happens daily sniffer shovel forward to a shadow on Throne hot flamed bones all around moan Ten swords swagger sweat dripping from Consol Partner’s neck factory glass bottles smashed heck for dissolution in Violet Flames fleck stomach blanching another announces Bankruptcy ! flicking coloured hair moving cushions bare dahlias grace coffee table, hiding face no mace or grace This is Amenti ! See Mark of Beast a shadow snore faint speaks with female undertones weak s insults moans declares receipts for equipment stole Amenti Amenti ! Dark corridors malign assign meat seats eat their capital feats Piscean, old one travelled all zodiacs watch breaking points sob alone signing death documents out of sight blight zero power might there are other ways I say, be a Light A scribe writes on sheets of A4 more pen stolid thick as thighs shoes pointed high she listens well detects lies galore to ignore sore pacifies “One day at a time” waving document dimes feeding Matrix rhymes They call a neighbour to strengthen bolts trying to halt jolts avail to cosmic jail have already fallen prey to Halls of Amenti what is the point of painting shame ? Stand before Lord of the Dark confess He pierces lightning tests into swarming wasp nests out they buzz from sacral fuss realise they are in Amenti cannot hush stings come fast before wings blast Sky is waiting wide there is a tunnel out of darkness besides tower moments are portal shocks cracking habitual actions fracking exposure first before Amenti’s Lord of Dark underworld’s confusion unpredictable illusions Come come dispel concentric circles spiral loop hurdles Fire makes charcoal to write your hoary stories glory Amenti exists to list lessons here awaiting no dating or mating Choose a tunnel out of the funnel Hurry towards pink flamingos flawlessly flapping rapping ! ©GhairoDanielsPoetry& Song2025

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Date: 3/4/2025 3:36:00 AM
You are so special in your way with expressing! So many brilliant lines in this, especially the zodiac sign stanza really stood out for me along with the ending! Brilliant and very different metaphors that made me pause and think deep! "Fire makes charcoal to write your~" what a line "Sky is waiting wide there is a tunnel out of darkness besides tower moments are portal shocks cracking" deep! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 3/4/2025 4:28:00 AM
ThKU Empress. Really I appreciate your feedback, as always. U are a Star I resonate with. Very encouraging because I thought this one was too dark.

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