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19.29 Oct. 6, 2024

Halloween Smiles



Three brothers with their Halloween costume
Played trick and treat after riding log flume
Men asked them to pose awhile
For a photogenic smile
But in a shocking countenance, they fume.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 1:10 PM
cute limerick,Len.
Gasun Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Thank you for reading my poem my dear poet friend Andrea. So much appreciated. Blessings. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Good one. Quite the humorous lot or scary whichever way you look at it. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Thank you for reading my poem my dear poet friend Sara. So much appreciated. Blessings. Hugs
Richards Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:38 AM
lol ... Boys will be boys - never quite happy to pose for a photograph. I don't know how many photos my son ruined with his antics when he was little. Nice Limerick :)
Gasun Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 10:39 PM
YOu're right my dearest poet friend Suzette. Boys don't mind if they've poise lol. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Thank you so much as well belatedly for acknowledging some of my entries in your contest. It means so much to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Liwayway Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Awesome poem as always my Idol friend. Belated Happy birthday. God bless you always. Miss you and Hugs <3
Gasun Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 10:42 AM
Thank you for reading my poem dear poet friend and your uplifting words. Quite flattered esp calling me idol always. BTW, how come you knew my BD? It's not this week. The last time you've greeted me as far as I remember was the blog here of our dearest poet friend PD countless years back. Thank you so much for the greetings. So sweet. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Too cute! I love this, Len!
Gasun Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Thank you so much my dearest poet friend for reading my poem and your uplifting words. I'm glad you love this. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
Sharma  Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Oh, quite a clever take on the picture prompt this is! Absolutely wonderful how you've incorporated the Halloween theme here, whilst displaying a scene that comes alive in words. Three brothers fuming with spooky roars ~ that made me giggle.
Gasun Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 9:09 PM
Oh, thank you so much my dear poet friend Hiya for reading my poem and your encouraging words. So happy to hear again from you. Hope all is well. Thanks for your time and loving comments dear. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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