Notes About The Poem

12 October 2023
Contest : Spooky Halloween              Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Halloween Sidewalk borrows a little from

my upcoming poem

'Rum n Raisin 10 - Three Months Of Crazy'

as that poem was too long for the contest.

 

 

Halloween Sidewalk

The world had gone mad, all the people had flipped
I glared at a window where blood and gore dripped
Folk wandered blindly, their eyes hanging out
And bats big as rats seemed to flit all about

Two nuns and a vicar with vampire fangs
Lurked under the tree where a skeleton hangs
A haggard old hunchback went lumbering by
A rat riding high on the stake in his eye

Green men with stitches and bolts through their necks
Gargoyles enduring some terrible hex
A madman was strutting the strut of the dead
While clutching the arrow that’s right through his head

A witch reached out for me and that’s when I fled
I ran to my house and cried out, “They’re all dead!”
The door opened wide and my dad’s hair was red
“Look Son, I’ve got a big axe in my head.”
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Ooh…running for safety and you find out you can’t go home! Congratulations on your scary write, Terry!
Flood Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 5:05 PM
Thanks, Kim. Appreciate your visit
Bowring Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:18 PM
Many congratulations on your first place win Terry! Hooray! Well deserved my friend. As soon as I read this delight, I knew it was a winner! Spooky but still got your great humour added to it as well! Well done! :):)
Flood Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, Christina. Chuffed with this win… I rarely do 16 lines : Ha ha!
Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Terry, I enjoyed your spooky Halloween poem with a dash of humor, entertaining, congratulations on your first place win!
Flood Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Thanks, Kim. Appreciate the high placement.
Kauffman Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Hey Terry! Knew I was in for a Halloween treat, not a trick, when I saw your poem on the winners list!!! Was not disappointed! Wonderful, flowing rhymes and terrific, horrific images! Congrats and high fives for your win! Blessings and cheers! Time for ghosties and ghoulies to go back to bed for another year! Hope your dad recovered!
Flood Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Thankyou, Sam, glad you enjoyed. Your comments are very much appreciated. Terry
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October 27, 2023 at 2:14 PM
A horror story indeed, an incredible read…. Belle
Flood Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Thanks, Belle. ‘Incredible’ suits me ;-)
Bowring Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 2:17 PM
I love your style Terry - you are so clever! A great storyteller with an abundance of humour. Perfect! All your poems flow so well with great rhyming. So, so entertaining. This is such a fun Halloween read with so much in it - all aspects covered. The last two lines made me laugh. Well done! I’m thinking a daily dose of Terry’s poetry will keep the blues away :) I better start now… Good luck in the contest. :):)
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Thank you, Christina. One of my more restrained poems (word-count wise). Only a week to go and I can release it’s ‘parent poem’, hope it won’t be an anticlimax. ;-)
Radice Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:14 AM
This. Is. A. Scream. ..and reminds me of saturday nights where I live. Nice one Terry! Cheers - Gary
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Oh! THAT’S where you live! Ha Ha… glad you enjoyed, Gary.
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:38 AM
oh my you did an excellent job here , Terry.
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 3:13 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Sorry for my tardy reply… been struggling with a lengthy write, which I finally completed today. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:53 PM
Fantabulousmarvelisticincredibleostic creation, Terry. Pure hilarity. Thanks! ~ Gershon
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 3:16 PM
If you can find a perfect rhyme for that first word… you’ll win the donut! Always glad to give you a giggle, GW. ;-)
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 8:52 AM
The world around us can go mad, Terry, in the insane manner, but if madness is responsible for your humor, stay insane!
Flood Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, Lin… I think! I decided to write ‘Rum n Raisin 10’ in honour of Halloween but finished it sooner than expected. I’m hoping to hang on to it til Halloween, but lines here and there seemed fitting for this contest. So I yanked them out, dumped the kittens (Awww!) and filled in the blanks. Glad you enjoyed. By the way… I haven’t been called ‘insane’ since I fell in that river in Paris.
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October 11, 2023 at 7:17 PM
On my word Terry, the poem is scary though hilarious, except of course the axe in dad’s head… Belle
Flood Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Thanks, Belle. The original poem made it clear that this was all faux gore… alas the contest has a line limit so I hoped I’d inferred that message in the final line. ;-)
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