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Halloween Protein

I’m preparing for this Halloween 
But the cobwebs I refuse to clean 
My spiders donations
Give some palpitations
Yet I find them rich in protein




A New Halloween Inspired Limerick poetry contest
23rd October 2019 
Syllables counted on poetry soup counter - 9 9 6 6 9
Sponsored by - Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:16 AM
LOL- Cute & witty. I love a great limerick and this is great!
Horne Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:34 PM
LOL, love it
Perrin Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:14 AM
Thanks Jack :-) x
Inman Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Sick! In a very good way. : )
Perrin Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:15 AM
Thanks James :-) x
Dutta Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 10:09 PM
CONGRATS to win. Well-penned. I am scared of spiders.
Perrin Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:16 AM
Thanks Anisha:-) x
Romios Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Congrats on this win. A delightful poem Love, Panagiota
Perrin Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:16 AM
Thank you :-) x
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 10:25 AM
Nicely done, Tania...
Perrin Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:09 AM
Thank you lovely x
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Oh my, not what I expected *lol*.
Perrin Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:09 AM
Lol x
Gondolf Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 5:10 PM
Back to say congrats, Eilaine, I see you won with your crunchy critters. Hugs, John
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:34 AM
Thanks for popping back John ;-) x
Foster Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 12:14 AM
lol... silly... i love silly... Ann
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:34 AM
So happy you liked it ;-) Thanks Ann x
Devonshire Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Oooh, so many of my friends are terrified of spiders. Even I wouldn't dream of eating them. Nice limerick, Elaine. Congratulations on your win and have a Happy Halloween, Carolyn
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Carolyn :-) x
Theraven Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Elaine, Happy Halloween! -Richard
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Back at you Richard ;-) x
Callus Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Witty and creative, Elaine:) Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:31 AM
Thank you so much Paul :-) x
Rose  Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:37 PM
A what a witty poem, congrats on your win, dear Elaine
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Pixie :-) x
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:46 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thanks so much Jan :-) xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:22 PM
Good one! Congratulations, Elaine!
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Kim :-) x
Kitchin Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:11 PM
Elaine, congratulations on your winning placement with your very clever and creative limerick!
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Hi Tanya Thank you so much for my placement in your contest ;-) x
Warrior Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 10:22 AM
Superb limerick my friend...it has been said that we eat 6-8 spidys a year while sleeping...I prefer 10-12...more protein the better lol...happy Halloween, Elaine...^WW^ :o)
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Yuck! Lol thank you ^WW^ :-) x
Horsman Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 12:49 AM
Makes one think, love this clever limerick.
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Harry :-) x
Theraven Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Elaine, This Limerick is packed with protein. I was watching this old movie. D'you know that the human head weighs 8 pounds? "I can't compete with that" -Jerry Maguire
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Lol thank you so much ;-) x
Aurora Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Eww... but funny. It's been a long time since I saw a limerick. This is very good.
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:27 AM
I’m glad you liked it ;-) Thank you lovely x
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Ha, ha! Give me a protein vitamin supplement any day. ~ Spider-Meat Deficient (LOL)
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Lol Thanks for the visit Gershon :-) x
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:59 AM
I was thinking protein in the webs?? haha. The spiders of course!!!! Great funny poem.
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Lol thank you lovely :-) x
Chiri Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 8:31 AM
Haha I loved this! And I hate spiders too! Haha! Oh I see you friended me on Facebook!;) great job and feel free to post any poetry on my site there too please!;) it's called poets and poetesses!;)
Perrin Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Hi Brenda So glad you liked it ;-) I will have a look for your site, thanks lovely x
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 8:04 PM
lol this was funny, though i will pass on the spiders...
Perrin Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 7:14 AM
Lol Thanks Sandra :-) x
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:04 PM
:))) ... but, ÆSJ :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Perrin Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Thank you lovely :-) x
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