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Halloween Night

I see heaven's natural satellite of the earth, the twilit lunar reflection after the sun sets- The Halloween moon gently bows down, feeling all the children's tiny footsteps. I see the ghosts walking among the streets, shades of crimson blood soaked vampires- Shadows of black with grey misty fog, intrigued with all the scary costume attire. Fear in me as I approach a haunted house, fake saws cutting bodies looking so real- Creepy clowns chasing me in a corn maze, my heart races and I start to frantically squeal. Frightened by the sounds of the walking dead, spirits rising on Halloween night every year- The cemeteries reek of cessation and fatality, watching one-hundred-year-old zombies appear. The witches and warlocks bring out their talisman, conjure spells and perform human sacrifice- Werewolves creep out from the woods with ease, I watch as the innocent children they entice. On the oracular night of the revered Halloween, cryptic creatures roam the earth indiscreet- They fit in perfectly without being acknowledged, the children should be careful as they trick-or-treat. Halloween Night Contest October 12, 2016

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Date: 10/22/2016 12:45:00 AM
Back with congrats!
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Date: 10/21/2016 8:33:00 PM
What a very descriptive spooky Halloween treat! Haha!! Great Job!! ( : Awesome!!
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Date: 10/21/2016 12:24:00 PM
Wonderful n unique. Congrats Laura to win first place.
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Date: 10/21/2016 10:50:00 AM
spooky treat, lou.. best congrats on your fine award..huggs
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Date: 10/21/2016 9:19:00 AM
Very nice, very original!
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Date: 10/21/2016 3:13:00 AM
Well deserved win, Laura. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/20/2016 11:48:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
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Date: 10/20/2016 9:57:00 PM
SO well-written, Luloo! Congrats on your top win. Janice
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:35:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Laura
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Date: 10/20/2016 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 10/20/2016 7:19:00 PM
Super big congrats. Laura. You did WONDERFULLY!
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Date: 10/20/2016 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win poem, Laura, Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/12/2016 4:30:00 PM
Nice and creepy :) Good luck for the contest, luloo.
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:31:00 AM
thank you sweet Agnes :)-luloo
Date: 10/12/2016 1:51:00 PM
I adore that first verse, it's scary but there's something lovely about this poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/13/2016 11:30:00 AM
thanks lovely Paloma :)-luloo
Date: 10/12/2016 12:13:00 PM
I am not a Halloween fan and you freaked me out with the imagery LuLoo ! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:30:00 AM
thanks Jan :)-luloo
Date: 10/12/2016 12:08:00 PM
Ok, this was dark and frightening and once I go to this line: "Creepy clowns chasing me in a corn maze" it was me who was running. Really nice Laura.
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Date: 10/13/2016 11:30:00 AM
lol thanks Chris :)-luloo

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