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Halloween Night

silhouette visage 
scare awake the silent dead
on Allhallows eve

weird sounds penetrate
wildly woods so dark and deep
making one cower

a cold eerie chill
overtakes a breathless evening
waking dead spirits

fears manifest great
sullenness apprehensions
scaring one to death

little children lurk 
the streets full of kindly houses
with fun faces that awe

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/10/2010 9:46:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Caryl. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:41:00 AM
I love your halloween Haiku. Very scary. Thank you for the nice comments. Best wishes in the contest. Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:03:00 PM
Great haiku. Best of luck to you in the contest, hirley
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:34:00 PM
thankxcxx for supporting my contest Caryl and good luck...judging will be tonight if all entries max at 35 ... appreciate your support... great piece too..with luv..
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:46:00 PM
Great images of the spooky All Hallows Eve, Caryl! I play games with the kids -- get dressed up like a witch with lots of green makeup. Sometimes they run away! The older ones are on to me though. Hope all of the streets are filled with "kindly houses" this year and the little ones have a safe Halloween. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:13:00 PM
Very descriptive of fall ...Enjoyed reading your work..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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