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- Halloween Night -

The wind is strong, blowing west 
                                   ___     ghost night     ___ 
                                   Shadows of greedy beasts,
                                     as leaves deep footprints
                                              in wet soil
                                          No decay process
                                          ... a spooky script

                                    Darkness is their kingdom,
                                          with foul-smelling
                                            toothless gums
                                            ... they see you
                                    even though the gaze is stiff

                                          "an eye for an eye
                                             tooth for tooth "
                                   the coffin lid was never sealed
                                           with wooden plugs

                                   ... the gates of hell are opened






                                                 28/10/2021
                                        Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Very creepy to think of the undead escaping from a coffin on Halloween. Chills Anne-Lise. I hope you enjoyed Halloween. My granddaughters and grandson did. Blessings xxoo
Vaso Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 12:04 AM
Gave me shivers, loved this!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 1:37 AM
I can relate with this. Yesterday I had a Covid booster and it was painful. Spent the night hearing the heavy rain and debating if I needed a painkiller. Lovely poem.
Parker Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 4:08 PM
You have captured Halloween quite well, dear poet
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 3:53 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile this is spooky. Hugs.
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 12:10 PM
Spooky vibes--apt for Halloween, Anne-Lise.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Great scary poem dear Anne Lise. Well done. Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Your well in halloween mode Ann, you created quite a spooky scene. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Skelly Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Oooo, nice and spooky...Delice
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