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Halloween Moon

Casting dubious shadows
Wistful and stirring
A full moon rising
Keeping its eye on
Giddy ghosts and goblins
And costumed little munchkins
Out loose trick or treating



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~BYGONE DAYS OF SUMMER~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on September 25, 2019 for contest HALLOWEEN MOON sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE  -   RANKED 1ST
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Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:23 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Perrin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:02 AM
I love the idea of the moon watching over the children. Congratulations on your win :-) x
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:04 PM
Thanks, Elaine. Much appreciated.
Awtry Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 1:49 PM
I rather like the idea of the moon keeping watch over the wee ones. Congratulations on your top tier win!
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so much, PS. Most appreciated.
Chiri Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Line congrats on your win!;)
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.
Kiser Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:57 PM
This is an adorable piece of poetry. Love it.
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Thank you so much, ML.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:06 AM
Now I feel like trick-or-treating is right over the hill.
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Yes right over that moonlit hill...
There Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Loved this! So glad to be reading you here :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Hello there, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 5:26 PM
ahhh I see you saw it kind of the way I did, Line. Very cute!
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 1:19 PM
Hey, this is great, Line! Not the usual haunted, grisly 'crap-ola,' but a poetic snapshot of trick-or-treating from an unconventional angle. Hope it takes first prize. Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:36 PM
I appreciate your grandiose generosity, Gershon. LOL Most appreciated.
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Your poetry manages to catch the cute and dark feelings of this time of year at the same time. Great work, I expect to see this no lower than first place!
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:37 PM
Wow Connor, Thanks for the marvelous compliment. Most appreciated.
Green Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Really cute my friend. Brings back many memories of my youth.
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:38 PM
Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Chris.
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Cute poem. Well done Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Sergi Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:42 AM
A brief but well done poem, Bravo!!
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Thanks, Ralph. Much appreciated.
Long Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Now, this was a very fun poem to read. Everything flowed so very freely. Very original work! Lol! Well done, friend!
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, James.
Michael Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Your poem is a treat...Lovely imagery
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Thank you so much, Arturo. Most appreciated.
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