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Halloween Hiccup

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Some children arrived dressed as ghouls, I asked don’t they learn dates in schools - They’d come one day early, Were rude and got surly, I chided them as stupid fools! A NEW Halloween Inspired Limerick Poetry Contest 8,8,6,6,8 checked with how many syllables Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 10/21/19

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/14/2019 4:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan :-) x

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/11/2019 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations Jan, You do have such a way with words.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/4/2019 4:33:00 AM

Pagan retribution? Well written. Kind wishes, Kai

Joseph May

Date: 11/3/2019 4:52:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats on your win Jan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2019 10:33:00 AM

Stopping back with congratulations, Jan! Way to go - Carolyn

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/30/2019 8:38:00 PM

Ah, your sense of humor mingles well with Halloween, congrats on your win Jan. great entry.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/30/2019 7:23:00 PM

One day early! Congratulations, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2019 8:16:00 PM

thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/30/2019 7:12:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun and clever limerick!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2019 8:15:00 PM

thanks Tania its actually Halloween day here today although we call it Hop Tu Naa:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2019 3:39:00 PM

:) Good one, Jan. Best wishes in Tania's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2019 8:15:00 PM

thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 10/23/2019 7:31:00 AM

LOL, had a chuckle at this x

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 5:15:00 PM

thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/22/2019 7:09:00 PM

Happy Halloween my dear Jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 5:14:00 PM

thanks my sweet friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/21/2019 7:38:00 PM

G'day Jan … know very little about Halloween Jan but it appears you are up to speed with it all - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 5:13:00 PM

I dont like Halloween and thankfully its not really big here

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/21/2019 10:04:00 AM

Young kids I don't mind but gangs of yobs I don't answer the door. The shops are full.of cheap.tack at the moment. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2019 5:13:00 PM

I've seen the stuff in poundland and agree its tat lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2019 8:04:00 AM

Happy Halloween Eve, Jan. Hey get there early and get the good candy. : ) This was fun.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/21/2019 9:30:00 AM

Thanks Chris - am so glad Halloween isn't that 'big' over here we have our own celebration called Hop Tu Naa:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2019 7:27:00 PM

Rude ghouls get no treats!.. Nicely done Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 10/21/2019 1:51:00 AM

thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 10/20/2019 6:58:00 PM

You write the most amazing poems, your artistic ability is beyond compare!! Even your poop ones lol

Jan Allison
Date: 10/21/2019 1:51:00 AM

get away with you Bobby May lol you know I write some real crap poems and not just about poop lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/20/2019 4:58:00 PM

they were only preparing for tomorrow... for their sister's costumes they did borrow...they shouted and bitched..you raggedy witch...candy-less they walked home in sorrow

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2019 5:03:00 PM

lol TS a great response:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/20/2019 4:53:00 PM

You could melt the chocolate on top of the pumpkins? Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2019 4:56:00 PM

lol Rico!:-) hugs Jan xx