Halloween Haiku

on halloween eve
apple bobbing with grandma......
false teeth on apple

smiling carved pumpkin
advertisement of toothpaste......
grandma's false teeth
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Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 8:22 PM
Way to go, kash. I especially like the first one!
Mehta Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 10:05 PM
Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Kash
Brown Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Halloween Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 10:26 PM
Congratulations on your Halloween Haiku win Kash
Sweetheart Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 7:15 PM
Congrats Kash on another great win with these stunning Halloween Haikus my friend..enjoy luv..
Song Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 6:08 PM
I think I shall send this to my dentist for Halloween, Kash. The ladies in the office will also enjoy it! Congrats...u wrote a great haiku, friend. Gwendolen
A   Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 2:45 PM
KASH , congratulations ON YOUR VERY XOOL entry for my HALLOWEEN contest.. have yourself a wonderful Halloween,,;-) p.d.
Stella Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 10:54 AM
omg Kash my mom would of lost her false teeth on this you crack me up the imagery is fantastic thanks for sharign and for stopping by with comment on my eye of the tiger had to change it alittle at end but thinks its still worked out lets hope lol keep up the wonderful writing
Freeman Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Haaaaaaaaa! Thanks for your comment Kash. Wonderful gig on the false teeth. You go girl. Agape, Moses
Okubo Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Cute. Love it. Thanks for your kind comments.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Hi Kash...hope all is well with u my friend..enjoying reading once again.. smiling..luv..
Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 8:28 PM
You had me laughing out loud, Kash. This is amazing humor and delightful imagery (grandma's false teeth). Love those last two lines. Love, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 7:23 PM
a warm feeling, kash poet! THANKS! jimbo
Onclaud Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 10:30 AM
rrring.. this is your dentist calling.. i have new offer for teeth cloning! unbelievable humor... lol,, come ! :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..My oven is dinging saying check on food..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
VERY fun and how you kept those false teeth in the scene!! I especially liked the first one. I did bobbing for apples with my students today. they didnt' really get into it and they all cheated and grabbed the apples by the stems. Or else they didn't try at all! Nice seeing you with a new one tonight! Luv, Andrea
Song Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 5:52 PM
This is magical and a belly buster too! Poor grandma better get her teeth back...I envision a first place with this one. So awesomely written! Gwendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 2:16 PM
a great humorous haiku for Halloween Kash my friend... great visual picture haha..good luck in the contest luv..
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October 24, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Ahhhhh I love the humor in this great entry... wishing you all the best in the contest my poet friend....Michael
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 5:46 AM
I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Kash. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 3:05 AM
hey Kash puts gran in a different light now..David
Henderson Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 2:29 AM
gosh Kash, remind me not to smile around you!!!!!!!!
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