Jared Pickett Poet Haiku

Halloween Haiku

Triple Haiku
5,7,5 -- 5,7,5 -- 5,7,5

Evil brews, no rules,
looming witches ride their brooms,
demon eyed ghouls drool.

Potions have been brewed,
voodoo dolls alter my mood.
Serial killers.

Vampires, Ware-wolves,
Kruger and Micheal Meyers,
stalking to retire..

***Note*** This is an edit of my original Random Thoughts *49* Haiku--Tanka--Haiku... 

 
Jared Pickett
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9/8/2010

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Debbie Guzzi November 5, 2010 at 5:20 PM as always TOO much Light & Love

Katherine Stella September 15, 2010 at 3:42 AM this made me crack up and also should be told on halloween night loved the imagery here congrats on placement my friend also thanks a bunch for your kindest comments on my stuff I will be back to hit ya up more me behind on giving returns views again thanks for the great read keep on trucking my friend

Sara Kendrick September 14, 2010 at 10:31 AM Good luck in the contest with this scary write...Sara

Jimmy Anderson September 14, 2010 at 8:25 AM Soup Mail Bro!!

Brittany Andrews September 12, 2010 at 1:30 PM wow! you should check out some of my poems. even though they may not be as good as yours. but at least read them? and comment? have a good day... -Angel4eva23

Robert A. Dufresne September 12, 2010 at 5:41 AM Congratulations Jared. Nice job and great win!

Francine Roberts September 11, 2010 at 10:06 AM congrats on your spooky win

Dory Chrest September 11, 2010 at 12:26 AM talk about spooky.what a fabulous entry....congratulations on your win, in poetry, Dory

John Freeman September 11, 2010 at 12:05 AM Congratulations Jared on your second place" way to go", Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman September 10, 2010 at 11:45 PM excellent winer Jared. Harry

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2010 at 10:46 PM WAy to go, Jared, I hope to try out the way using a tanka in the middle too. LUv, Andrea

Charles Henderson September 10, 2010 at 8:28 PM Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles

Hyle Chu September 10, 2010 at 8:01 PM Congrats, brah.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 10, 2010 at 6:45 PM Congratulations on the second place win, Jared

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 10, 2010 at 6:09 PM Congrats Jared on your win :) this sure is a creepy feel to it nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 10, 2010 at 5:11 PM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Jared. Love Carol

Carolyn Devonshire September 10, 2010 at 2:05 PM I knew this would do well, Jared. Great haiku series! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 10, 2010 at 1:35 PM Congrats Jared on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest.. an awesome entry full of eerie spooky lines ... creativity personified .. thankxxx for supporting my contest ..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta September 9, 2010 at 7:44 PM I just wrote about this poem I read yesterday when the sweetheart posted her composition. Jared

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2010 at 1:23 PM thankxxx Mr. J.. I LUV it this way too.. u can put it back the original way after the contest ...u are so sweet to work with me this way..I won't forget how cooperative u can be ... good luck Lone Wolf.....now howl loud so Mama can hear u..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire September 9, 2010 at 12:50 PM Please keep these predators away from the little ones. Kruger has always been especially frightening with those long nails. I think you did a good job rewriting your original into a triple haiku. Have a great day, Jared. Best wishes, Carolyn

Diane Locksley September 9, 2010 at 10:55 AM Neat poem! Hate to think of kids roaming around with witches and serial killers on the loose. Werewolves and vampires along with Freddie and Meyers - wow, that's a lot to take in. I'll stay home on Halloween!

Jared Pickett September 9, 2010 at 10:48 AM I am almost certain this poem will not place because it lacks power, it lacks the savvy feel that you are all used to.... This is more for "Sweethearts" enjoyment, and my willingness to stay within her guidelines.... The Tanka in the center stanza sets the poem off... Please read the poem noted at the end.......:JP]