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Halloween Delivers

She couldn't believe her luck with the knock at the door, This day of all days, the one day she can will a way. One can only trap with the appropriate bait laid; She preened herself in the mirror plying red "trap set" Winking at herself with the smack of the lipstick case. She knows she's got one this time. (He'll make the perfect plate!) Fine meat wrapped in brown, clean shaven and recently bathed; The fresh scent of his flesh had her drooling already. "How may I help you" (to myself? she thought with a smile) "Oh hi" obviously surprised by her beauty, brash As pheromones filled his lungs he forgot who he was "I'm uh"... "You're here for dinner" she whispered in his ear Taking the package and closing the door behind him. 17.10.13 Composed for Russell Sivey's "Halloween Scare"

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Date: 11/9/2017 10:31:00 PM
A little cannibalism goes a long way Maureen, a nice subject for Halloween but I rather like it every day of the year. My mouth is salivating and lips are smacking. I love the succubus like sensual undertone and the line, "She preened herself in the mirror plying red "trap set," made me smile, a very clever line.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2017 12:02:00 PM
*Giggle* I noticed a pattern in my Halloween writes, am trying to decipher... ;) Thank you so much for visiting my page!
Date: 11/9/2017 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, - Oh, this is fun, Mo - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Greg! Delighted you enjoyed :) xomo!
Date: 11/9/2017 3:16:00 PM
Back with Congrats, Maureen, well done :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/10/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Lovely :) xomo!
Date: 10/19/2017 8:32:00 AM
Excellent Halloween poem Maureen, so imaginative and so well written, very clever, GL in contest. :))
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/19/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Roy! :) xomo!
Date: 10/16/2017 10:57:00 AM
Nicely done done, Maureen, perfect for Halloween ... :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/16/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Eve :) It was a lot of fun! xomo
Date: 10/16/2017 12:33:00 AM
Scary n Interesting. Good luck. Love
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/16/2017 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Anisha :) Lovely day to you xomo
Date: 10/14/2017 6:10:00 PM
Oh wow, I love how you did your Halloween poem. My Boo poem is a bit like this one!! (not posted yet though). I think this is one of the most interesting ones I have seen for Halloween contest.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/15/2017 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! I'll look for it :) xomo!
Date: 10/14/2017 5:15:00 AM
Hi Maureen , scary but lots of fun to read my friend ;;)))) hugs and best of luck in contest :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/14/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Niall! It's a fun one, did you enter? Cheers dears xomo :)
Date: 10/13/2017 9:02:00 PM
Scarey indeed, nice Halloween poem!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/14/2017 4:58:00 AM
Thanks Arthur! :)
Date: 10/13/2017 12:08:00 PM
A charming story--a trap and a catch--best for a win!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/13/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Vijay! Was fun to pen :) Bless! xomo
Date: 10/13/2017 11:36:00 AM
Okay this is scary and deliciously plotted. Spider and the Fly.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/13/2017 12:13:00 PM
Nothing like a yummy UPS guy ;p

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