Halloween Delivers

She couldn't believe her luck with the knock at the door,
This day of all days, the one day she can will a way.
One can only trap with the appropriate bait laid;
She preened herself in the mirror plying red "trap set"
Winking at herself with the smack of the lipstick case.
She knows she's got one this time. (He'll make the perfect plate!)
Fine meat wrapped in brown, clean shaven and recently bathed;
The fresh scent of his flesh had her drooling already.
"How may I help you" (to myself? she thought with a smile)
"Oh hi" obviously surprised by her beauty, brash
As pheromones filled his lungs he forgot who he was
"I'm uh"... "You're here for dinner" she whispered in his ear
Taking the package and closing the door behind him.



17.10.13

Composed for Russell Sivey's
"Halloween Scare"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 9, 2017 at 10:31 PM
A little cannibalism goes a long way Maureen, a nice subject for Halloween but I rather like it every day of the year. My mouth is salivating and lips are smacking. I love the succubus like sensual undertone and the line, "She preened herself in the mirror plying red "trap set," made me smile, a very clever line.
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November 10, 2017 at 12:02 PM
*Giggle* I noticed a pattern in my Halloween writes, am trying to decipher... ;) Thank you so much for visiting my page!
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November 9, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Congratulations on your win, - Oh, this is fun, Mo - keep up the great writing! :-)
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November 10, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Thank you Greg! Delighted you enjoyed :) xomo!
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 3:16 PM
Back with Congrats, Maureen, well done :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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November 10, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Thank you Lovely :) xomo!
Pett Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Excellent Halloween poem Maureen, so imaginative and so well written, very clever, GL in contest. :))
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October 19, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Thank you Roy! :) xomo!
Roper Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Nicely done done, Maureen, perfect for Halloween ... :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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October 16, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Thank you Eve :) It was a lot of fun! xomo
Dutta Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Scary n Interesting. Good luck. Love
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October 16, 2017 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Anisha :) Lovely day to you xomo
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Oh wow, I love how you did your Halloween poem. My Boo poem is a bit like this one!! (not posted yet though). I think this is one of the most interesting ones I have seen for Halloween contest.
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October 15, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Andrea! I'll look for it :) xomo!
Vaso Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Scarey indeed, nice Halloween poem!
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October 14, 2017 at 4:58 AM
Thanks Arthur! :)
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 12:08 PM
A charming story--a trap and a catch--best for a win!
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October 13, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Thanks Vijay! Was fun to pen :) Bless! xomo
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October 13, 2017 at 11:36 AM
Okay this is scary and deliciously plotted. Spider and the Fly.
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October 13, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Nothing like a yummy UPS guy ;p
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