Halloween Coo

Written: November 12, 2023 _____________________________________________ The place's full of orcs and witches and pumpkins with straw in their britches vampires are creeping round with zombies swarming bound and Frankenstein's face full of stitches They giggle and yell, "Trick or treat!" then open their bags full of sweets I throw some sweets in there and I cause them a scare and coo as they race down the street.

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Date: 12/24/2023 7:56:00 AM
A ray of sunshine is your poem curving lips to smile, alive with movement and imagery. A masterpiece!
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Date: 11/12/2023 12:33:00 PM
- Really fun to read, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 11/12/2023 11:17:00 AM
Ahhh!! How cute. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing this delight with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 11/12/2023 10:04:00 AM
A great Halloween write Sotto my friend, really scary and very apt, all the bad guys together, who would not get a fright. Halloween after all wouldn't be Halloween without them, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/12/2023 9:25:00 AM
Hah this is so fun , its so good to see this side of you too, you can write on any theme and form and still keep that profound touch of yours in your lines! I am in absolute awe of how you’ve written this and even in this form the way you’ve painted imagery. Is beyond impeccable! I love the frankenstein with stitches and also “ and coo as they race down the street.” made me smile! What a fun read! Loved it! If this is for the contest, im sure it will do very well: goodluck!
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