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Halloween Bandit

Hey bro, what’s up with that You said you were Too old Too cool No costume No trick & treating for you Not interested in going out to get your own candy You’d obviously rather rummage through my stash All in the name of helping me with my diet I want to thank you ever so much for your concern But don’t do me any favors, bro If I were you I’d watch my back AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on October 14, 2019 for contest IF I WERE MY BROTHER sponsored by BOBBY MAY - RANKED 2ND

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/2/2019 2:40:00 PM

Terrific write and win. Congrats. Hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Cecilia. Most appreciated.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:18:00 AM

Well I'd watch my back after that. (lol) Congrats on your placement Line. ~Charlie

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/1/2019 4:17:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2019 2:47:00 PM

Hope Bobby's been watching his back, what with your win in his contest, Line. Great write. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2019 6:41:00 PM

Grrr... Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2019 9:48:00 AM

- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest Line :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2019 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 8:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement I would never steal your candy Line, I would just eat it

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2019 1:02:00 PM

Well enjoy it then, Bobby! It's only fair, you gave me a placement. Thanks. LOL

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/18/2019 1:05:00 PM

Cute - so cute - siblings - can't live with them, can't live without them! Lovely write, Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/18/2019 8:32:00 PM

So very true, Jennifer. LOL

Hello There

Date: 10/16/2019 10:22:00 PM

hehehe... adorable, Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2019 11:46:00 PM

Hello There, Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/16/2019 6:54:00 PM

lol...i love this Line...it's funny how kids guard their halloween stash but then over half of it ends up getting thrown away in a few months... adorable poem :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2019 7:06:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.