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Halloween Bandit

Hey bro, what’s up with that You said you were Too old Too cool No costume No trick & treating for you Not interested in going out to get your own candy You’d obviously rather rummage through my stash All in the name of helping me with my diet I want to thank you ever so much for your concern But don’t do me any favors, bro If I were you I’d watch my back AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on October 14, 2019 for contest IF I WERE MY BROTHER sponsored by BOBBY MAY - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 11/2/2019 2:40:00 PM
Terrific write and win. Congrats. Hugs
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Date: 11/2/2019 9:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cecilia. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/1/2019 6:18:00 AM
Well I'd watch my back after that. (lol) Congrats on your placement Line. ~Charlie
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Date: 11/1/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/30/2019 2:47:00 PM
Hope Bobby's been watching his back, what with your win in his contest, Line. Great write. ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/30/2019 6:41:00 PM
Grrr... Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/30/2019 9:48:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest Line :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2019 1:03:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/30/2019 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement I would never steal your candy Line, I would just eat it
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Date: 10/30/2019 1:02:00 PM
Well enjoy it then, Bobby! It's only fair, you gave me a placement. Thanks. LOL
Date: 10/18/2019 1:05:00 PM
Cute - so cute - siblings - can't live with them, can't live without them! Lovely write, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/18/2019 8:32:00 PM
So very true, Jennifer. LOL
Date: 10/16/2019 10:22:00 PM
hehehe... adorable, Line :)
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Date: 10/16/2019 11:46:00 PM
Hello There, Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 10/16/2019 6:54:00 PM
lol...i love this Line...it's funny how kids guard their halloween stash but then over half of it ends up getting thrown away in a few months... adorable poem :)
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Date: 10/16/2019 7:06:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/16/2019 8:31:00 AM
I wouldn’t take a chance. Unless of course you had skittles and then all bets would be off. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/16/2019 4:38:00 PM
You can have all my skittles, Richard. No problem.
Date: 10/16/2019 7:07:00 AM
Best for the contest, Line!!! Bless you always, Gina
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Date: 10/16/2019 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, Gina. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/16/2019 2:35:00 AM
Best wishes, I like this
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Date: 10/16/2019 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/15/2019 3:09:00 PM
cute one. I gotta check out his contest now!!
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:22:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Andrea.
Date: 10/15/2019 1:00:00 AM
Lin, I like this poem. I've rarely felt this edgy side of your poetry prowess, if ever? Well done. -Richard
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Date: 10/15/2019 5:39:00 AM
Thanks Richard, Halloween candy brings out the tiger in me. LOL
Date: 10/14/2019 10:27:00 PM
Hey SIS! great Poem!
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Date: 10/15/2019 5:38:00 AM
LOL thanks BRO.

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