Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Halloween Bandit

Hey bro, what’s up with that
You said you were Too old Too cool
No costume No trick & treating for you

Not interested in going out to get your own candy
You’d obviously rather rummage through my stash
All in the name of helping me with my diet

I want to thank you ever so much for your concern
But don’t do me any favors, bro
If I were you I’d watch my back



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on October 14, 2019 for contest IF I WERE MY BROTHER sponsored by BOBBY MAY  -  RANKED 2ND

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Cecilia Macfarlane November 2, 2019 at 2:40 PM Terrific write and win. Congrats. Hugs Line Gauthier November 2, 2019 at 9:53 PM Thank you so much, Cecilia. Most appreciated.

Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 6:18 AM Well I'd watch my back after that. (lol) Congrats on your placement Line. ~Charlie Line Gauthier November 1, 2019 at 4:17 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf October 30, 2019 at 2:47 PM Hope Bobby's been watching his back, what with your win in his contest, Line. Great write. ~ Gershon Line Gauthier October 30, 2019 at 6:41 PM Grrr... Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 9:48 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest Line :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier October 30, 2019 at 1:03 PM Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Bobby May October 30, 2019 at 8:59 AM Congratulations on your placement I would never steal your candy Line, I would just eat it Line Gauthier October 30, 2019 at 1:02 PM Well enjoy it then, Bobby! It's only fair, you gave me a placement. Thanks. LOL

Jennifer Proxenos October 18, 2019 at 1:05 PM Cute - so cute - siblings - can't live with them, can't live without them! Lovely write, Hugs, Jennifer. Line Gauthier October 18, 2019 at 8:32 PM So very true, Jennifer. LOL

Hello There October 16, 2019 at 10:22 PM hehehe... adorable, Line :) Line Gauthier October 16, 2019 at 11:46 PM Hello There, Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Sandra Adams October 16, 2019 at 6:54 PM lol...i love this Line...it's funny how kids guard their halloween stash but then over half of it ends up getting thrown away in a few months... adorable poem :) Line Gauthier October 16, 2019 at 7:06 PM Thanks, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Richard Lamoureux October 16, 2019 at 8:31 AM I wouldn’t take a chance. Unless of course you had skittles and then all bets would be off. Good luck in the contest. Line Gauthier October 16, 2019 at 4:38 PM You can have all my skittles, Richard. No problem.

Regina Mcintosh October 16, 2019 at 7:07 AM Best for the contest, Line!!! Bless you always, Gina Line Gauthier October 16, 2019 at 7:37 AM Thanks, Gina. Most appreciated.

Panagiota Romios October 16, 2019 at 2:35 AM Best wishes, I like this Line Gauthier October 16, 2019 at 7:37 AM Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2019 at 3:09 PM cute one. I gotta check out his contest now!! Line Gauthier October 15, 2019 at 9:22 PM Thanks for your visit, Andrea.

Quoth Theraven October 15, 2019 at 1:00 AM Lin, I like this poem. I've rarely felt this edgy side of your poetry prowess, if ever? Well done. -Richard Line Gauthier October 15, 2019 at 5:39 AM Thanks Richard, Halloween candy brings out the tiger in me. LOL

Timothy Mcguire October 14, 2019 at 10:27 PM Hey SIS! great Poem! Line Gauthier October 15, 2019 at 5:38 AM LOL thanks BRO.