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Halloween Bandit

Hey bro, what’s up with that
You said you were Too old Too cool
No costume No trick & treating for you
Not interested in going out to get your own candy
You’d obviously rather rummage through my stash
All in the name of helping me with my diet
I want to thank you ever so much for your concern
But don’t do me any favors, bro
If I were you I’d watch my back



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on October 14, 2019 for contest IF I WERE MY BROTHER sponsored by BOBBY MAY  -  RANKED 2ND

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Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 11/2/2019 2:40:00 PM Terrific write and win. Congrats. Hugs Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/2/2019 9:53:00 PM Thank you so much, Cecilia. Most appreciated.

Charles Messina Date: 11/1/2019 6:18:00 AM Well I'd watch my back after that. (lol) Congrats on your placement Line. ~Charlie Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/1/2019 4:17:00 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/30/2019 2:47:00 PM Hope Bobby's been watching his back, what with your win in his contest, Line. Great write. ~ Gershon Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/30/2019 6:41:00 PM Grrr... Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2019 9:48:00 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest Line :) - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/30/2019 1:03:00 PM Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Bobby May Date: 10/30/2019 8:59:00 AM Congratulations on your placement I would never steal your candy Line, I would just eat it Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/30/2019 1:02:00 PM Well enjoy it then, Bobby! It's only fair, you gave me a placement. Thanks. LOL

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/18/2019 1:05:00 PM Cute - so cute - siblings - can't live with them, can't live without them! Lovely write, Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/18/2019 8:32:00 PM So very true, Jennifer. LOL

Hello There Date: 10/16/2019 10:22:00 PM hehehe... adorable, Line :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2019 11:46:00 PM Hello There, Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Sandra Adams Date: 10/16/2019 6:54:00 PM lol...i love this Line...it's funny how kids guard their halloween stash but then over half of it ends up getting thrown away in a few months... adorable poem :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2019 7:06:00 PM Thanks, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/16/2019 8:31:00 AM I wouldn’t take a chance. Unless of course you had skittles and then all bets would be off. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2019 4:38:00 PM You can have all my skittles, Richard. No problem.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/16/2019 7:07:00 AM Best for the contest, Line!!! Bless you always, Gina Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2019 7:37:00 AM Thanks, Gina. Most appreciated.

Panagiota Romios Date: 10/16/2019 2:35:00 AM Best wishes, I like this Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2019 7:37:00 AM Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/15/2019 3:09:00 PM cute one. I gotta check out his contest now!! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/15/2019 9:22:00 PM Thanks for your visit, Andrea.

Quoth Theraven Date: 10/15/2019 1:00:00 AM Lin, I like this poem. I've rarely felt this edgy side of your poetry prowess, if ever? Well done. -Richard Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/15/2019 5:39:00 AM Thanks Richard, Halloween candy brings out the tiger in me. LOL

Timothy Mcguire Date: 10/14/2019 10:27:00 PM Hey SIS! great Poem! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/15/2019 5:38:00 AM LOL thanks BRO.