"halloween Babes"

Congratulations on your win in the contest with this one..I don't know how that I missed it earlier...Have a great day! Thanks for faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Hello there John !! What a wonderful and fascinating enjoyment to read this wonderful poem. (( many cool and scary thoughts go thru my mind while reading this awesome and clever write. Enjoy and take care,..p.d.

congrats John on your placement in contest enjoyed the read and imagery on this one we have over like 500 kids that hit us each year and the cutest little faces ever seen also thanks again my friend for your support to me and others here at soup keep up the great writing blessings to you and family

I thought so...now a winner in all the contestants book! Great job John. Congrats

nice one , congrats on your win

What an eerie picture you have drawn. Many congratulations on this win. Thanks for your comments.

amazing and spooky..especially your final stanza! Congratulations on your win, in poetry, Dory

enjoyed this John, congrats. Harry

Hmmm, i bet this does happen once in a rare while. Good one, john. Congratulation. Luv, Andrea

Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles

Congratulations on the fourth place win, John

A different take on halloween but even scarier since it so real--congrats on your win, Moses --nikko :)

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest John. Love Carol

Compelling haiku series, John. You're racking up the honors today! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Congrats Moses on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest.. an awesome entry full of spooky flavor.. had no problems with my contest judging and finalizing ..if u need any help please contact me luv..

Winner in my book, John.

It has always amazed me how the "ghouls" prey on young innocents on Halloween. It take a dark soul indeed to tamper with treats and give mean-spirited tricks on Halloween. Even when I was a child, mom would not let me eat any candy that wasn't fully in its original wrapper. Halloween was still a fun event for youngsters, but the "innocent angels" could not comprehend the evil in men's hearts. Powerful haiku series, dear friend, and I wish you well in the contest. Love, Carolyn

very nice good luck in the contest you've done a great job here best wishes to you faleshia

John, good warning for parents and guardians of the young...also great entry for Linda's "Holloween Haiku" Contest. Wishing you good luck! Peace, love, Audrey

eww creepy, love it , good luck in the contest

Moses.. would u please read my poem "Trinity" .. for the Eternal Reward contest..luv.. thankxxx..

Well Moses u always are very creative .. thankxxx for supporting my contest luv.. good luck...

captures the spirit perfectly, John! good luck! jimbo

Great writing, John. These halloween joy seekers are certainly more at risk from humans than from ghosts and goblins. Great reminder to thoughtless parents. Love, Joyce