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"halloween Babes"

“Halloween Babes” Innocent Angels Prowl darken streets, seek sweet treats Human evil seeks… This pure Love of heart Unaware what evil lurks In human dark souls… Just another child Bites the dust of human lust’s Illusions of ghouls… For Contest: Halloween Haiku In Honor of : Linda-Marie Sweetheart of P.S.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2010 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest with this one..I don't know how that I missed it earlier...Have a great day! Thanks for faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2010 9:37:00 AM

Hello there John !! What a wonderful and fascinating enjoyment to read this wonderful poem. (( many cool and scary thoughts go thru my mind while reading this awesome and clever write. Enjoy and take care,..p.d.

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/18/2010 7:56:00 AM

congrats John on your placement in contest enjoyed the read and imagery on this one we have over like 500 kids that hit us each year and the cutest little faces ever seen also thanks again my friend for your support to me and others here at soup keep up the great writing blessings to you and family

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/12/2010 5:47:00 AM

I thought so...now a winner in all the contestants book! Great job John. Congrats

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/11/2010 10:07:00 AM

nice one , congrats on your win

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/11/2010 5:03:00 AM

What an eerie picture you have drawn. Many congratulations on this win. Thanks for your comments.

Dory Chrest

Date: 9/11/2010 12:30:00 AM

amazing and spooky..especially your final stanza! Congratulations on your win, in poetry, Dory

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/10/2010 11:49:00 PM

enjoyed this John, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 10:49:00 PM

Hmmm, i bet this does happen once in a rare while. Good one, john. Congratulation. Luv, Andrea

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/10/2010 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win in the contest. Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2010 6:47:00 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win, John

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/10/2010 6:12:00 PM

A different take on halloween but even scarier since it so real--congrats on your win, Moses --nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2010 5:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest John. Love Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2010 2:08:00 PM

Compelling haiku series, John. You're racking up the honors today! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2010 1:39:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your success in my Halloween Haiku contest.. an awesome entry full of spooky flavor.. had no problems with my contest judging and finalizing ..if u need any help please contact me luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/8/2010 5:21:00 AM

Winner in my book, John.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/8/2010 12:31:00 AM

It has always amazed me how the "ghouls" prey on young innocents on Halloween. It take a dark soul indeed to tamper with treats and give mean-spirited tricks on Halloween. Even when I was a child, mom would not let me eat any candy that wasn't fully in its original wrapper. Halloween was still a fun event for youngsters, but the "innocent angels" could not comprehend the evil in men's hearts. Powerful haiku series, dear friend, and I wish you well in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/7/2010 5:02:00 AM

very nice good luck in the contest you've done a great job here best wishes to you faleshia

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/6/2010 6:02:00 PM

John, good warning for parents and guardians of the young...also great entry for Linda's "Holloween Haiku" Contest. Wishing you good luck! Peace, love, Audrey

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 1:33:00 PM

eww creepy, love it , good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2010 12:48:00 PM

Moses.. would u please read my poem "Trinity" .. for the Eternal Reward contest..luv.. thankxxx..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2010 12:47:00 PM

Well Moses u always are very creative .. thankxxx for supporting my contest luv.. good luck...

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/6/2010 12:45:00 PM

captures the spirit perfectly, John! good luck! jimbo

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/6/2010 12:21:00 PM

Great writing, John. These halloween joy seekers are certainly more at risk from humans than from ghosts and goblins. Great reminder to thoughtless parents. Love, Joyce