Halloween

Hags with snaggled teeth and black hats of cone
Amidst the moldy graves that mark death's zone
Laugh a cackle that chills one to the bone.
Let the dead come forth and release their moan.
Only tortured souls venture to atone
While the living shrink from this sight alone.
Even strong men quiver as smells are blown 
Endless from roaming corpses who must groan.
Nadine watches all as the ruling crone.

'Neath a moonless sky young children appear
Inviting strangers to treat or have fear
Goblins will never again look so dear
Hags with snaggled teeth are shocked as they hear,
"Trick or treat my friends, all Hallows are here."



10/18/2016
For contest Halloween
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 4:42 PM
kudos on your high spot, carol... a joy to read this winning work!..huggs
Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 4:43 PM
oops, i mean larry!
Eastman Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on a fun winning write.
Bradfield Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Thanks, Carol...it was fun!...Larry
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in the Halloween contest, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I appreciate it!..Larry
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 10:57 AM
great descriptive acrostic Larry:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Thank you, Jan........Larry
La France Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Larry congratulations on your win with this wonderfully penned poem ~
Bradfield Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, I appreciate your comment.Larry
Y. Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 11:40 PM
Hi Larry, You penned a well written Acrostic and Monorhyme . Congratulations on your 1st place win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Bradfield Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Alexis!!
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Larry, Perfect Acrostic & also Monorhyme & syllable count.... thank you so very much for entering : ) Hugs Eve
Bradfield Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 10:03 PM
My pleasure, Eve! Great fun and thanks for the placement and for sponsoring the contest...Larry
P  Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Hags conjure up all kinds of ugliness, 'inviting strangers to treat or have fear' who thought up this silliness for All Hallows' Day? Good luck Larry.
Bradfield Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Paloma
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