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Halloween She innocently ventured down the staircase in her dressing gown a chore that she'd forgot about to put empty milk bottles out. Put warm key in ice cold lock then opened door and froze in shock a silhouette in the half light had struck her pale, eyes wide in fright. She staggered back against a shelf and gradually composed herself. Fear turned to anger as she cried 'You idiot, I could have died!' She thought it early for such capers but I'd only been to fetch the papers.

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Date: 12/20/2015 8:16:00 PM
Had it not been Halloween she probably wouldn't have been half as shocked! A nice tension/release piece Viv... well done! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/20/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, Keith, I enjoy fabricating a good twist. regards, Viv
Date: 10/19/2015 1:06:00 AM
Good first read for today for me. Julia, xx
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Date: 10/19/2015 1:19:00 AM
Thanks, Julia. Now grab a cuppa and go back to bed x
Date: 10/18/2015 7:04:00 PM
Very funny, sir! Nice sense of humor. These little ending twists are such a pleasure.
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:26:00 PM
Cheers, Duke, appreciate your visits as always. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/18/2015 1:29:00 PM
Curiosity, fright and humor in one poem. Very nice Viv.
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:25:00 PM
Thanks James, it would have been difficult to write if I was handsome. Sigh.... Regards, Viv
Date: 10/18/2015 3:11:00 AM
Very clever, well-written and enjoyable. A fun write, truly enjoyed reading ... CayCay
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:40:00 AM
Boo! x

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