Halloween

Halloween


She innocently ventured down
the staircase in her dressing gown
a chore that she'd forgot about
to put empty milk bottles out.
Put warm key in ice cold lock
then opened door and froze in shock
a silhouette in the half light
had struck her pale, eyes wide in fright.
She staggered back against a shelf
and gradually composed herself.
Fear turned to anger as she cried
'You idiot, I could have died!'
She thought it early for such capers
but I'd only been to fetch the papers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Had it not been Halloween she probably wouldn't have been half as shocked! A nice tension/release piece Viv... well done! Best wishes, Keith
Wigley Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Thanks, Keith, I enjoy fabricating a good twist. regards, Viv
Ward Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Good first read for today for me. Julia, xx
Wigley Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 1:19 AM
Thanks, Julia. Now grab a cuppa and go back to bed x
Beaufort Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 7:04 PM
Very funny, sir! Nice sense of humor. These little ending twists are such a pleasure.
Wigley Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Cheers, Duke, appreciate your visits as always. Regards, Viv
Inman Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Curiosity, fright and humor in one poem. Very nice Viv.
Wigley Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Thanks James, it would have been difficult to write if I was handsome. Sigh.... Regards, Viv
Godwin Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 3:11 AM
Very clever, well-written and enjoyable. A fun write, truly enjoyed reading ... CayCay
Wigley Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Boo! x
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