Halloween

silenced he stood there knife in hand music eerily in the background darkness wore his soul the children were afraid as blood dropped like rain from his blade

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/1/2019 4:57:00 AM

Wow... spooky spooky … Blessings as always, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 10:08:00 AM

it was spooky at first....i am not big on the evil holiday... blessings.... :)

Hello There

Date: 10/31/2019 9:29:00 PM

What the....uh, buh-bye!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/1/2019 4:54:00 AM

Yeah I am one of the first to arrive at work and when I saw him by the woods I said nope not getting out of my car when he moved in front of the bus yard and people were walking by him I knew it was safe ...

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/31/2019 7:09:00 PM

EYES on the RUN...Nobody's hanging Around...

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 7:17:00 PM

haha...i am one of the first few to arrive at work, i saw him by the roadway and there was no way i was getting out of my car until more people arrived...Thanks my friend! :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/31/2019 4:14:00 PM

Wow great Halloween poem!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 6:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Brenda! :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/31/2019 4:01:00 PM

You could easily write free verse that could be used in a movie sound track rather than music - Andrea's rhyming poems (some of them obviously) were used just that way in a film making the independent film rounds now. You painted the horror to easily pop full blown in my mind's eye. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 6:14:00 PM

Happy Birthday to your Tim...i can't imagine being born today...mine was 10 days ago...i missed the holiday thankfully...hugs :)

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/31/2019 4:23:00 PM

I must see it and will make that happen right after I type this. Today is My Tim's birthday - what a day to be born, eh! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 4:03:00 PM

Aww thank you so much CayCay speaking of really good penning you should see the one John Hamilton dedicated to me today. I loved it. Hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2019 2:31:00 PM

I saw in one of your comment replies today that you said Jason was standing at the gate of your place of business this morning. I'll bet that was creepy. Loved your poem and I kind of thought that is where it came from. Happy Halloween Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 2:38:00 PM

We had a coworker being creepy this morning and yeah I think I posted it in a comment to you. We were just all talking about it at the elementary school and the poem came to me :). Thank you my friend ... hugs

Judy Ball

Date: 10/31/2019 2:26:00 PM

oohoohoo! RUN EVERYBODY! Scary Stuff. God Bless, JB

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/31/2019 2:27:00 PM

Lol thanks a coworker was having fun this morning. He played the part too well ;) hugs