Hallowed Soul


Inspired by Ronnie James Dio Song : Sacred Heart In the dark opaque night across the space of silence, through the wasteland of your ravaged existence, you take the ordained journey forsaken, but the track of travail in illusive time you lose within the gloomy labyrinth of torment. Trudging at the edge of tolerance you hear the sane spirit whisper, this journey has no end. In the fold of the desolate soul in agony you see the dismal sky crash down. Buried in the dark debris of mystique hope you pray for the light of the almighty. The broken dreams don’t return, for you can’t mend their wings to fly in the recreated sky of the mangled mind, but time restructures your daydream, raise you free from the ruins of desire, you drift through the rainbow arch. You travel liberated from the clutch of evil on the blessed inward journey. In the sanctum of the devout essence at the edge of the enlightened eternity, you perceive the divine glow of the inner sun, ethereally illumining the hallowed soul.

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Date: 6/27/2025 9:48:00 PM
'raise you free from the ruins of desire' amazing line dear poet. beautiful write. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/28/2025 1:42:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 6/27/2025 5:56:00 PM
Simply great. Congrats on placing.
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