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Hallowed Dusk

An evening wanes over the hills to trail away, far from sight... my eyes observe a hallowed dusk evanescing into the mist, as clouds are flushed with hints of rose lavender, and mild orange, that petals drop bowed silhouettes into a dreamy afterglow. This mystic breath carries me high, on twilight's crown-- a quiet ripple when nothing but the grace of lull, ascends through skyline’s dome... while my essence blazes a flow kindling inner calm; till dawn greets eventide...halfway. Contest of Edward Ebbs Anacreontic Verse 1 ~ Observations of Daily Life

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Date: 11/21/2015 6:11:00 AM
A peaceful, calm and beautiful poem in which imagery plays a leading part. #7 Congratulations on yet another deserved win, Nette:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/20/2015 9:02:00 PM
Exquisite imagery, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:02:00 PM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:59:00 AM
I love nette, congrats on your win...hugs
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Date: 11/19/2015 7:34:00 PM
...can almost feel the sun setting through the length of your poem Nette..."grace of lull" is terrific :)
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Date: 11/19/2015 3:34:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2015 10:04:00 AM
very tranquil, beautiful imagery - congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:12:00 AM
Hi nette: congrats on a beautiful poem!
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:01:00 AM
Such a beautiful, peaceful image your words display in my mind, Nette. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2015 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Nette, so peaceful.
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Date: 11/19/2015 6:42:00 AM
Congrats Nette on this wonderful win!
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Date: 11/19/2015 4:44:00 AM
As sweet as ever nette.. loved much.. congrats on awesome win!!
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Date: 11/19/2015 4:25:00 AM
Nette, so beautiful as you! grats!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:09:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations Nette
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:17:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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Date: 11/10/2015 11:52:00 AM
Lovely - good job with the contest ... CayCay
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Date: 11/9/2015 3:55:00 PM
very beautiful, Nette. Sure to be in the winners' circle!
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Date: 11/9/2015 9:20:00 AM
I need this sense of solace before night ends, everyday. This remarkable poem is heavenly and spiritually fluent!
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:52:00 AM
Prevailing peace, and calm in the fluid beauty of this verse, Nette. A winner for sure. hugs!
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:21:00 AM
you have captured the senses and the feeling of awe and wonder
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Date: 11/9/2015 7:56:00 AM
The imagery is delightful Nette such a feeling of tranquillity floods over me - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 11/9/2015 7:38:00 AM
Mesmerizing! A seven, dear nette!
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