Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Hallowed Dusk

An evening wanes
over the hills
to trail away,
far from sight...
my eyes observe
a hallowed dusk
evanescing
into the mist,
as clouds are flushed
with hints of rose
lavender, 
and mild orange,
that petals drop 
bowed silhouettes
into a dreamy
afterglow.
This mystic breath
carries me high,
on twilight's crown-- 
a quiet ripple
when nothing 
but the grace of lull,
ascends through
skyline’s dome...
while my essence
blazes a flow
kindling inner calm;
till dawn greets
eventide...halfway.



Contest of Edward Ebbs
Anacreontic Verse 1
~ Observations of Daily Life

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Paul Callus November 21, 2015 at 6:11 AM A peaceful, calm and beautiful poem in which imagery plays a leading part. #7 Congratulations on yet another deserved win, Nette:) Hugs // paul

Kim Merryman November 20, 2015 at 9:02 PM Exquisite imagery, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2015 at 3:02 PM Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Kayod5 Kayode November 20, 2015 at 2:59 AM I love nette, congrats on your win...hugs

David Mohn November 19, 2015 at 7:34 PM ...can almost feel the sun setting through the length of your poem Nette..."grace of lull" is terrific :)

Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 3:34 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot November 19, 2015 at 10:04 AM very tranquil, beautiful imagery - congrats on your win in the contest :)

Ralph Sergi November 19, 2015 at 9:12 AM Hi nette: congrats on a beautiful poem!

Sandra Haight November 19, 2015 at 9:01 AM Such a beautiful, peaceful image your words display in my mind, Nette. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

James Inman November 19, 2015 at 7:50 AM Beautiful imagery Nette, so peaceful.

Balveen Cheema November 19, 2015 at 6:42 AM Congrats Nette on this wonderful win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 19, 2015 at 4:44 AM As sweet as ever nette.. loved much.. congrats on awesome win!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 19, 2015 at 4:25 AM Nette, so beautiful as you! grats!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Skat A November 18, 2015 at 8:09 PM Nette, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 18, 2015 at 7:28 PM Congratulations Nette

Edward Ebbs November 18, 2015 at 6:17 PM I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!

CayCay Godwin November 10, 2015 at 11:52 AM Lovely - good job with the contest ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2015 at 3:55 PM very beautiful, Nette. Sure to be in the winners' circle!

Franco Gonza November 9, 2015 at 9:20 AM I need this sense of solace before night ends, everyday. This remarkable poem is heavenly and spiritually fluent!

Kp Nunez November 9, 2015 at 8:52 AM Prevailing peace, and calm in the fluid beauty of this verse, Nette. A winner for sure. hugs!

Frederic Parker November 9, 2015 at 8:21 AM you have captured the senses and the feeling of awe and wonder

Jan Allison November 9, 2015 at 7:56 AM The imagery is delightful Nette such a feeling of tranquillity floods over me - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7

Demetrios Trifiatis November 9, 2015 at 7:38 AM Mesmerizing! A seven, dear nette!