Hallow Inside

I'm feeling hallow inside 
 Like my insides are dying
   Rotting because I am lonley
      or more because I am tired
        All I experience is tears
           Sorrounded by people 
             Who never get disappointed
                It sucks 
                 They truly will never get
                   How it feels to be lonley
                    To need someone to hold
                        Someone with the right words
                         To fix all the unpleasant thoughts
                             So they watch me 
                            Not knowing exactly what to say 
                                    I make it through the day 
                                          On my own occord
                                    Sweet comforting words
                                          Blow into the wind 
                                           and after a minute 
                                                they've forgotten 
                                              I'm hallow inside
                                                The wound is breaking through the skin 
                                                     Soon my body will learn to show the pain i'm in 
                                                                 Soon the hallowness will end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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