Hallow

It sees
It does
It does what it sees
It sees nothing
So nothing… is what it does.
I see
I do
I do to see
I see more
But the more I do… the less he sees
I am hallow
And hallow is how I’ll be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 11, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Instead of being hallow, why not shine even brighter for one who will appreciate your light? Excellent lines!
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