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Halley

Oh shooting star! Burnt out bright across a sky thier wonder in your light a frozen trail of tears you leave behind Their laughter at your sparks I have felt your ash You roam lost within the dark I run to where you've crashed I've ran so fast so far to where you are Oh fickle little shooting star And Oh shooting star! Burnt out lost within a sky They all cheer They cannot see you wave goodbye Oh shooting star! I sigh despite their smiles for the further you have flown I know the faster you will die So fly fly away shooting star Love Sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/6/2020 8:22:00 PM
Love the premise of this poem!
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Skaidiv Morjin
Date: 11/9/2020 1:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Mr.Grieves I try to disguise my premise with imagery mostly

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