Halfway-Nowhere

Love, is not a moderate image to paint !
I have tread a serene parks walk with colourful abundant trees and beauteous scenes
Yet Love  :
“let me honour those who favour you their forte”!
Lustful young love and bitterness  in sweet red wine
Patience in a white steady car awaiting traffic to mind time
Everything coming together , it is my damn fault you are not mine?

Frantically screaming in the passages of my life
In a motion that is slow they kiss me to complete my life
And touch me I fathom inside me caterpillars turn to  butterflies

Tomorrow im in the hue-less shadows of solitude
And love is a ghost 
Oh it unremorsefully robs me of hope
On an isolated bench gazing the starry nights 
Your identity is a historic illusion of time
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Agustin Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 12:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
baloyi Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 3:41 AM
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR POWERFUL WORDS!!!MAY GOD THE MOST HIGH BLESS YOU SO GRACIOUSLY TOO.
Gifford Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 7:58 AM
Hello Vivian, this is a heartfelt and very touching write. Nicely written. Never give up on hope. keep the fire of hope lit, leave the rest to time, as one day it will become a flame. Have a great day, fellow Poet.
baloyi Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Hello Zyrool..this means alot to me considering how Great you are also ..this my very first publish ever since i unconciously started writing poetry at 6th grade , so having such feedback means the world to me . THANK YOU SO MUCH JUST MADE MY DAY , LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE COMMENTS .Have a great day .
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