Half-Spherical Raindrop

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A half-spherical raindrop rolls...
     

                                                   ... becomes a sphere
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Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Sara. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
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May 12, 2010 at 3:33 AM
Sara, It's nice to be here and see your win. Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
Chachere Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 6:48 PM
that image looks cool, Sara. . . yo' drippy drops of water in this poem . .(: your brain is like a sphere made up of all sorts of creative stuff, like a creative forest, gosh.sorry i havn't commented back in time, something happened.have a great night. -Always&Forever Lynette
Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 1:39 PM
so creative!! Light & Love
Moribund Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 11:43 AM
I really dig this poem, AWESOME!!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 3:20 PM
this is so cool, how half a circle grows fully. Congratulations! LUv, andrea
Johnson Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 8:01 AM
How entirely different. Congratulations on your third place. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congrats on the win
Sweetheart Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Congrats Sara on your 3rd place win in Brian's contest with this great Monoku.. and how honored am I to be sharing 3rd place with u... VERY... enjoy sweet Sara.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Dufresne Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Unique and exceptional, Sara. congrats to you in Brian's contest! ....and thanks for the soup mail! -Robert
Culverhouse Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 5:42 AM
crystal of a spherical creature.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 8:23 PM
Good one for the contest.. good luck if your entry for Brian... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Riley Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 3:53 PM
It is what it is ...good, thanks for sharring clever. Judy Riley
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