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Silent One's Twilight Of My Life Contest

Half- Time

Watching for thrushes that grow moist 
from dusky soil, my heels trek along 
deepened clay. As I lay on the porch listening 
to tress rustling, inky moon sinks its riddled face 
through veil of midnight. Somehow, I feel restless...
abandoned  like jagged refrains of this heart 
which seems to fall into an unsettling interlude
 of time. Yes, this golden chapter drifts,
 as a baptism of new beginnings swells.

on this barren field…
a solitary twig cracks
from one glittered tree

The nightfall drools looking for the yellow 
among clouds. For a while, the hazy outlines
 of strangers--native women and children ---
disturb my  revelries  of younger  moments
 lingering through the dipping sway from moonglow.
 Through calm intervals of laughter, I sway
 with mid life's flow;  fire to air, salt to honey. 
Much as I need to inhabit youth's space,
 it no longer belongs to me. 
But twilight comes brimming with all
 the glistened jewels of my own half- time of a  world.

between two lifetimes
is a haunting melody…
like an unsung note
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Godwin Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 8:55 AM
Just beautiful, hauntingly it nostalgically touched me shades of bittersweet. Very well written. Congrats
Hind Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:41 PM
lovely!! I like how you did this form
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 1:57 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Half- Time" write again. Have a blessed weekend with your wonderful win...............
One Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 1:14 PM
The depth of emotions in your haibun is very impressive.... You create a scene where the reader is transported into what your eyes are viewing and what your heart is feeling.... So many wonderful lines through out your prose.. I can feel the uncertainty in your opening, but also contentment at the end.. two great haikus also.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 12:35 PM
Your "Half- Time" is a wonderful write/story. Yes, "between two lifetimes." Great Ending, last 3 lines. "Good Luck" I also did this fun contest. Have a lovely day writing away............
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