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Half of a Full Moon

Half of a full moon in the sky,
Riding on the tides of the night;
Glowing from an horizon so high,
Half of a full moon ever bright.
 
Riding on the tides of the night,
The earth passes by with a smile;
Half of a full moon ever bright,
Always a sight so worthwhile.
 
The earth passes by with a smile
In response to the illumination;
Always a sight so worthwhile
Is that beautiful communication.
 
In response to the illumination
Glowing from an horizon so high,
Is that beautiful communication:
Half of a full moon in the sky.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/7/2016 4:02:00 PM

Hi Folajin. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.

Folajin Ademola
Date: 4/8/2016 6:57:00 AM

Thanks.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 10:01:00 PM

Folajin A, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~

Folajin Ademola
Date: 4/8/2016 6:57:00 AM

Thanks.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:17:00 AM

Congrats on a worthy win with this superb poem Folajin..

Folajin Ademola
Date: 4/6/2016 5:58:00 AM

Thanks

Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2016 5:53:00 PM

Folajin, congratulations on your win the reason for HM was because the last stanza should have read 5 3 6 1 Always a sight so worthwhile 6. Thank you for creating a poem for my contest. Hugs Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2016 9:28:00 AM

Thank you so very much!!!! A second place. Hugs Eve

Folajin Ademola
Date: 4/7/2016 6:47:00 AM

HALF OF A FULL MOON Half of a full moon in the sky, Riding on the tides of the night; Glowing from an horizon so high, Half of a full moon ever bright. Riding on the tides of the night, The earth passes by with a smile; Half of a full moon ever bright, Always a sight so worthwhile. The earth passes by with a smile In response to the illumination; Always a sight so worthwhile Is that beautiful communication. In response to the illumination Glowing from an horizon so high, Is that beautiful communication: Half of a full moon in the sky.

Folajin Ademola
Date: 4/7/2016 6:26:00 AM

Could you please explain clearer what you want me to do? I'd really appreciate if you do. Thanks.

Folajin Ademola
Date: 4/6/2016 5:57:00 AM

Thanks Eve, it was my pleasure.